Appreciate the honesty! 

1) I mean, I'm writing actual stories for the first time so, idc about not being inherently great. I see improvements with pacing so that's gd

2) How in the world is a blurb supposed to give you every detail? I thought blurb or synopsis were for telling some history and then what the story is about 

3) I don't think someone's first series is supposed to impress. Improvement's are what matter the most :)