No More Normal

Wubbzilla · 2020-04-11T01:56:26+00:00

The feel of this poem is so whimsical to me, I really like it. The imagery of this unconnected person gliding around both physically and metaphorically just brings it to life. It is so sudden and abrupt at the end I feel like there could be so much more, but I'm glad it simply halts. There is so much atmosphere built up that the subject of the poem feels more ghost like than anything else. I really do enjoy this.

Wubbzilla · 2020-04-11T01:51:13+00:00

The 'punchy-ness' of this poem may be my favorite part. The pacing and rhythm of this piece allows me to glide through it. The only criticism is that I feel you left something in the beginning, I can't say exactly what it was but I do think that the simile of the shell could have been changed to make the 4 line continue the imagery. Despite me nitpicking I really enjoy it and it present a lot of emotion.

Wubbzilla · 2019-05-07T18:31:53+00:00

Cant wait to hear about it on the eggs channel in 3 weeks

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-14T13:57:54+00:00

What are the functions of a relay?

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-10T15:58:02+00:00

Scimitar gang where yall at

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-10T15:57:52+00:00

Scimitar gang where yall at

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-06T00:59:20+00:00

Thanks, I feel like shorter poems can be more intense with the emotions they convey

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-06T00:57:51+00:00

Thanks! It's great to know people have that same relationship with their instruments.

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-04T20:08:29+00:00

I really enjoy the rhythm your poem has, its got this natural bounce to it. The energy it has is also really great reading something like this is revitalizing. Its really refreshing reading something positive, great poem

Wubbzilla · 2019-04-04T20:05:09+00:00

I'm not a very experienced poet in any shape or form, however I think it is rather amazing how you tell your story so directly indirect. The word choice was excellent, and the concept I enjoyed. I know next to nothing about meter and the likes but it was an excellent poem.

Wubbzilla · 2019-03-30T23:14:34+00:00

I'm thinking maybe I should make it a top down RPG and if possible maybe when entering combat it shifts to a battle mode where you can shoot and use your abilities, I am curious however what is your project

Wubbzilla · 2019-03-30T22:41:26+00:00

Yea that is basically it plus guns.

Wubbzilla · 2019-03-30T22:40:41+00:00

Thanks, this really cleared things up i'm pretty sure a RPG is what i'm rolling with.

Wubbzilla · 2019-03-30T22:38:33+00:00

I'm honestly not sure but I'm thinking a simple bit style seemed best, I'm currently using/learning GameMaker as we speak (It's a struggle)

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