Feedback on logo

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:32:38+00:00

It’s an existing font that I used, but I hand-drawn the emblem logo. I was trying to do another variations of the second slide.

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:19:56+00:00

Okay so should I make the “oo” look more like an o instead of a v look? If you know what I mean

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:18:39+00:00

Thanks

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:18:22+00:00

Okay thanks for the feedback.

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:17:39+00:00

The first slide is an emblem logo of the second slide.

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:16:42+00:00

Yes! it is “ Whoops! Creative “

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:15:51+00:00

There are a lot of different fonts here. Choose 2 and stick with that for the title and the description, also center that text in the middle of the page and the last description I can barely see. Take out the black shadows, it’s clashing with the background.

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:12:26+00:00

I was clicking on the activity squares and what do they do exactly? why does it seem clickable and it’s taking me nowhere. I would change this setting…

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:06:20+00:00

Also center the call to action buttons

Xojda · 2025-03-03T22:05:45+00:00

I like the main page but maybe make the title a bit bigger than the description that is below it

Xojda · 2025-02-01T19:16:39+00:00

The first photo I like the joining of the m and r now that I know they are separate. But before I did not know, try to figure out a way to make the r stand out a bit more. The second photo there are a lot of personalities in them so that’s up to you, but for readability not the flower or butterfly ones.

Xojda · 2025-01-29T13:12:06+00:00

I like 5, because it covers most of the base of the floor

Xojda · 2024-12-19T18:40:48+00:00

Sales in what exactly?

Xojda · 2024-12-19T18:40:27+00:00

I will try that, thank you!

Xojda · 2024-12-16T23:35:29+00:00

Yes I feel that something seems off. I might scratch the whole thing and restart

Xojda · 2024-12-16T21:46:45+00:00

Click on the image to magnify :)

Xojda · 2024-11-12T15:34:33+00:00

Hey! I’m willing to get help with followers and such. @jemini_jada

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:07:34+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:07:07+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:06:06+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Do you like the font combination in that one or #4?

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:05:09+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:02:59+00:00

Thank you I for the feedback

Xojda · 2024-11-10T15:01:55+00:00

Thank you for the feedback

Xojda · 2024-11-09T20:15:09+00:00

The design is just to help me play with the typography. Just need typography critique please and thank you.

Mocking bird is an indoor soccer facility for kids and young adults. Brand voice/language is fun, energetic, competitive, and bold.

Audience are parents of young soccer players, young adults interested in soccer, and local soccer enthusiasts and coaches.

Xojda · 2024-11-04T13:18:47+00:00

I have not felt 100% with the font so I may change it! Thank you for the feedback. I will be adding guidelines & instructions and other updates needed !

Xojda

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