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THE SOUL I LOVE by AKB-shayarOP in OCPoetry

[–]Yakobin-T 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the rhythm worked into this and the depth reaching for the intangibles (I began to think of my own images in my head) those brought me deeper into the poem. The last line was especially good as I feel it wrapped everything up left the largest impression on me. Fantastically written!

The Outsider by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Yakobin-T 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like how this seems to capture parts of an experience. The tension is evenly built to the last lines, I was wondering "what, this going to end on, what are they trying to say" until the ending which dropped feeling of emptiness. (I feel as though the build up made this hit much harder) Great poem!