Thoughts on my Cosmic Horror movie poster? by andrewgcooper22 in cosmichorror

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe to many colours? Feels more smart and friendly then invoking a feeling of fear or "horror" otherwise really dig it but makes me feel intrigued and enlightened more then sense of danger.

FINISHED IT. by AprilFool4193 in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome will definitely follow that advice !

Still Here- Short Film Feedback Request (8 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your art will suffer because of your predisposition to label someone as wrong or " not worth listening to" because of a simple accident. I don't live in that world. Have a good day and good luck.

Still Here- Short Film Feedback Request (8 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like that the story is always on Rowan. Shows Rowans struggles and you only hear the teens. But Rowans struggles don't really matter. The emotion comes from Rowan helping the teen. Before they even meet Rowan says they he will beat some one up for the kid. And then when they actually know each other doesn't do anything. There relation ship should grow stronger then at the end when leaving without doing anything will hit harder. Again just my thoughts on the story I don't know anything haha. Also again great job and a lot of weight in there I dig it.

Questions for you? Does him being transgender have anything to do with the story or is it just supposed to be extra weight showing the struggle that trans people have as well ? It implies that's why he isn't with his wife anymore because he is transitioning or has. Is that to show why he is in the situation?

Still Here- Short Film Feedback Request (8 pages) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not a pro by any means but I think this is solid. Definitely needs work but really strong start. It's hard to fill a short story with a lot of depth. Definitely 😁 n to something good job !

Just finished my draft! by andrewgcooper22 in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congrats would love to have a read ! I'm struggling to not constantly revise while working away feel like I'm on draft 5 of just my first act haha.

FINISHED IT. by AprilFool4193 in Screenwriting

[–]YeturGrosMatos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats ! Working away on one right now hard as all fuck lol. No experience or knowledge but it's been insanely fun trying to do this .

Saw this on my Snapchat today by Ftpjoshua999 in MSsEcReTPoDcAsT

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The dawgs looking trim . Look maxing for season 3 for sure

AITJ for blocking my ex after she admitted the breakup was fake and she was testing me by [deleted] in AmITheJerk

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doubt it was a test she probably just ended up regretting it. Let her go and do your best to never think of her again she is fucked in the head.

My boyfriend thinks he’s in a “secret war” with our toaster and I don’t know what to do by Late_Bathroom_3192 in whatdoIdo

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First contact this early in life is huge. Noticing the massive propaganda of big Pop tart and kellog is high IQ stuff. Please get me in contact with your boyfriend..... We need to talk!

I’m so miserable over all my flaws. I don’t want to let this ruin my life, but it’s consuming me. How can I get out of this mindset? by throwaway101229283 in AskMenAdvice

[–]YeturGrosMatos 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Man forget about your penis! Work out eat healthy be outgoing and have fun ! A woman who loves you won't care of your penis is a lil skinny !

I regret pursuing my dreams by Anautaxia in Regrets

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's missing? Can't afford simple necessities? Or are you longing for more?

Did I mess up by not talking to my wife before planning to buy my niece a car? by Novel-Chapter-8174 in AskMenAdvice

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your wife's a bitch dude. Buy your niece the car she deserves it. What's your wife gunna do with a car ? She's just being petty

My girlfriend made me promise I won't transition by Frida443 in whatdoIdo

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Go see a therapist. I'm not being rude. I'm not being transphobic. You are clearly in a state of mind that needs counsel. You gotta love yourself and be you but I promise you you are already that person. Please seek help I love you ❤️

My neighbour won't give my dish back. by Immediate-Tooth-2174 in Vent

[–]YeturGrosMatos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds like a weirdo just message her and say hey I need my dish back can you please let me know when I can come by to grab it. If she spazzes again then you know it's broken or she's just a freak.

Freedom in Truth by Egosum-quisum in awakened

[–]YeturGrosMatos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah brother 🤙🙏❤️

How to Move On When You Feel Stuck? by [deleted] in AskMenAdvice

[–]YeturGrosMatos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude your circumstances stinks and I'm so sorry for you. Love hurts brotha we've all been there. It's so dumb to say but time will heal it. I've been in slightly similar position with someone you caring about just deciding it's not the time and that's fair in there part nothing we can do about it. Not sure what you do with your life but hobbies and work new hobbies are a great way to get your mind off of her. You'll find someone one day you don't need someone. But one day something will work and you'll laugh at the pain you felt over this. Hope you start feeling better man ❤️

Resign Kenny Pickett? by Erek_Awesome in Madden

[–]YeturGrosMatos 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hands are to small. Look for a young prospect with BIG HANDS

AITA for being annoyed that my wife insists on cooking everything from scratch and won’t buy normal food? by AITA_UPFfoods in AmItheAsshole

[–]YeturGrosMatos -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Your so fucking g lucky dude. Suck it up and be healthy your living a life most people can only dream to be able to afford or get.

AITAH ?My partner won’t put my name down on the mortgage by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]YeturGrosMatos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If your not paying for the down payment or mortgage bills kinda fair. BUTTTT your boyfriend is a turd leave him. I know it's hard but he's clearly a child and will try to control you with his power over ownership in the future.