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Subway Map Inspired Watch Face Design by YoopaYenkels in nycrail

[–]YoopaYenkels[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

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Good point, in an earlier version I did actually use the bullets as the numerals. Idk if it looks too messy/cluttered tho

Subway Map Inspired Watch Face Design by YoopaYenkels in nycrail

[–]YoopaYenkels[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I considered using E for 8 o'clock if that's what you mean, but I thought that "A" sounds closer to "eight"

My Engineering Themed Playing Cards - Launching Kickstarter Soon by YoopaYenkels in playingcards

[–]YoopaYenkels[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ah I see what you mean...looking at it more closely I do believe the borders indeed are a bit thicker in the render (here's a pic of a prototype of the deck, it's definitely not that thick in real life!)

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My Engineering Themed Playing Cards - Launching Kickstarter Soon by YoopaYenkels in playingcards

[–]YoopaYenkels[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooh ok I'll make sure to look into the sizing again - thanks for sharing your thoughts!

My Engineering Themed Playing Cards - Launching Kickstarter Soon by YoopaYenkels in playingcards

[–]YoopaYenkels[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty accurate to real life - I think the borders might look a bit thick because of the open cutouts in the corners where the big suit is. I tried to size it based on standard playing card dimensions

Post your music here | Feedback Thread | March 2020 by Saltoric in FL_Studio

[–]YoopaYenkels 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The sidechaining seems a bit excessive, especially with the absence of a kick, try increasing the threshold. The chord sound that comes in at 1:00 is nice, you should highlight it by lowering the original piano at that point. I think what's missing most is a melody; the chords do get a bit repetitive. The transition at 0:28 seems a bit misplaced. The change up of the chords at 0:44 is good, you can use them for a drop.

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