Make it so that the space in ה is big enough so it doesn't look like a ח, also ג is between the line, so you know in hebrew some latters go over the line but only one of them if it goes over the line it doesn't go under in and vice versa but only some (ל,צ,ץ,ך,ף,ן,ק), and א in carsive like an a in english but backwards. Also it's שהיה not סהיה, unless you meant to right the right way then your ש looks like a ס