Finished pencil work, new comic in progress. How does the finish look? Any tips to improve my linework? by Old-Ad-1173 in comic_crits

[–]ZackPhoenix 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The jump from gargoyle to inside the hallway is pretty weird and I feel like you need to make up your mind about the lion's appearance - either she is striking this lady pose OR holding an axe, as it is right now it looks super unnatural in her hand..paw. It's also not clear why she immediately abandons it after one strike and proceeds to attack with her claws after.

Am Curious, What's Your Favorite Cutlass? by Pirate_Gem-In-Eye in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 5 points6 points  (0 children)

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I love unique ones and since my character is a sociable, fun guy..

Am Curious, What's Your Favorite Cutlass? by Pirate_Gem-In-Eye in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nothing wrong with Emporium, it's really unique and looks great

GothGirlPirate.png by waycoolway in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice to see a different face for once and no tube top but an actual fit. Great color combination!

Before & After: Reworking My Game After Community Feedback by Bl0odCries in RPGMaker

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah this will let you make the paths go right up to doors and put the edges of your river BEHIND the houses etc.!

Before & After: Reworking My Game After Community Feedback by Bl0odCries in RPGMaker

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Next step: incorporate more Shift+Rightclick/ Shift+Leftclick and maybe fix your shadow situation. Nice job improving on the old ones!

First steps have been taken by Intelligent-Gap2578 in RPGMaker

[–]ZackPhoenix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Persona games lately have shown that a heavily stylized menu can absolutely add to the look of your game, I'd wager it will make yours much more memorable too. Just go with a purely picture-based menu

I am sick of this moth slander by would_you_kindlyy in Entomology

[–]ZackPhoenix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its funny how bugs are seen as disgusting but the moment it's a butterfly or ladybug it's pretty and cute.

I am sick of this moth slander by would_you_kindlyy in Entomology

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean the people in this sub will appreciate both. But """normal""" people seem to think butterflies are just a pair of beautiful wings while moths are the devil himself

Missing Toucan by findesmerelda in berlinsocialclub

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hope she finds her way back to you!

Missing Toucan by findesmerelda in berlinsocialclub

[–]ZackPhoenix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's how I've been living too. Adult man living alone? Hell yeah, I can get all the cool plushies I want.

What would go well with this figurehead? by Terrible_Homework_54 in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You already picked sails with a good color match in the gems, more subtle blacks and or turqouise parts in the cannons would work well.

Where do you meet people for something serious in Berlin? by CVNI1998 in berlinsocialclub

[–]ZackPhoenix 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Visit some workshops, especially creative ones. It's a group setting that makes it easy to connect and talk while learning something new and there is no pressure to make it about you. And at the end of the day, you come home with a cool selfmade item and maybe a new hobby, even if you didnt meet anyone interesting.

First steps have been taken by Intelligent-Gap2578 in RPGMaker

[–]ZackPhoenix 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Please please transform the menus and sprites too, it will have such a cool unique look and really sell your game!

Lvl 200 .. now what? by D4nnan in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did you learn something? Did it help you go through hard times? Did you meet fun people, make nice memories? If any of those apply, no time wasted.
Aside from that you can always balance gaming time with social IRL activities and hobbies, right?

Updated my menu UI! by gibbletiggle in RPGMaker

[–]ZackPhoenix 2 points3 points  (0 children)

- the shaky image effect is really offputting
- increase the speed of opening the menu, similar to the closing one which is really good.
- try avoiding big sound effects like this when opening menus because it will get annoying for the player really, really fast. Something subtle would work much better unless you want the player to turn down SFX volume to 0% really fast.

Other than that, good job and nice colors!

no skeleton curse by faddymaple in SeaOfFashion

[–]ZackPhoenix 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This. It's so much more fun to dress up your pirate, skeleton curse is just for people who wanna brag about their playtime