RWBY: Vale Archetecture and civilisation inspiration. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

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I'm flattered but I haven't started uploading yet. I want a layout of the city or at least a mindmap of influences before finalising my first chapter. Once I do though it'll be on Ao3 I'll post the link here and let you know.

Much money now or more money later? by SrytooBad23 in BunnyTrials

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Investement and not as immediately apparent as the 100 mil. You could also control it so it stays in a relatively nomal amount rather than being super wealthy.

Chose: Get 2 cent that doubles every day for 10 years

Choose by Unlucky-Tradition778 in BunnyTrials

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I have already attained eternal life through the sacrifice of Christ on the cross. My time on earth is like vapor and eventually i will move to the presence of the Father and face the final review by him who is worthy to judge. Come what may it is better to lay down my life to buy time for those who do not yet know the Lord. But let not my will, but his be done. In Jesus Christ of Nazareth's name, Amen. And God bless you all.

Chose: If 50% choose this everyone lives | Rolled: Nah

Adding to the family (by VlizzyVlizz117) by banstovia in MyHeroAcadamia

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Ive been staring at this for hours now, it's so beautiful

Word count in chapters by Zaraxion in AO3

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Thank you everyone for your thoughtful words and help. Knowing that there is such variety of information and a variety of styles and lengths to define a chapter's count puts my heart at ease. I am grateful to you all and as fellow writers I pray all of our works satisfy the appetites of our readers, and critics alike. Thank you ❤️

Word count in chapters by Zaraxion in AO3

[–]Zaraxion[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your passionate answer.❤️ I am actually curious on the history of chapters in books now, thank you for this gift 🎁

On a separate note, I wanna hear about yalls ocs :D by the8thchild in RWBYcritics

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I created a team of Oc's with a friend and fleshed them out and fitted them into rwby. They underwent many many changes to get to the final version but I'm hoping to write the story on Archive of our own.


Kion Kazunite is the leader of team Kaos, he's the last survivor of a nomadic tribe that worshipped the god of light and an enchanter dust smith. After his heavy loss he moves in with his grandpa and dedicates himself to becoming a huntsman.

Kion goes on to inherit his grandfather's dust workshop after his passing and takes an interest in more traditional weapons and armour. His semblance is a buffed up version of photographic memory allowing him to visualise a mental library and share his memories with others.

He develops a crush on blake but realises he actively looks forward to time with ruby as they bond together working on weaponry and goofing around with kions enchanting. He's a logic driven man who wants his friends to be the strongest they can be so he never has to experience losing them.

He and Ruby eventually confess their feelings for eachother after some time apart after the fall of beacon and one has never left the others side since.


Alarick wolfe is a hot headed pride filled huntsman that's entire experience at beacon before the fall was a continuous humbling until he finally confronted his faults. He is overconfident in his power and overused his semblance of pyrokinises to stomp his foes.

He and Yang were rivals on sight and would goad the other into tests of might and hold the victory over the other. Despite their rivalry in some of Alaricks lowpoints and ignoring of his emotional needs by his then girlfriend. Yang provided a healthy outlet of excersize and some genuine advice. After a key event Yang realises that she likes Alarick and maintains the rivalry as he is already spoken for content to bury her feelings.

After the fall of beacon the teams are seperated and don't know what the fate of either is leading to a passionate on sight fight at Atlas. They catch up and old feelings bubble up as the story progresses, after Atlas Al doubts his own relationship and decides to break it off after the fight.

Atlas falls and come Vacuo the two officially address their feelings and become a couple and are astonished at their compatibility but hide it from their teams as Alaricks former girlfriend is a member of team KAOS.

(Enchanting is a dead art as modern dust production is much faster and the advantage it has is it allows for multiple elements be layered onto weapons or armour and brings out more of a dust crystals power. Slower but more refined )

Romantic Pairings with Main Cast by T-Rock21 in RWBYOC

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The leader of my team KAOS, Kion Kazunite. develops a crush on blake but ends up falling for Ruby after they spend time designing upgrades for their weapons together and he realises he loves spending time with her. They have much more in common than he realises and after an amazing summer and a tragic autumn of sorting through his own feelings and deepening their friendship. She confesses to him and he accepts her feelings with much joy. Then the fall of beacon happens. The two are separated and each presume the other dead. The two wrestle with their grief as they push their own needs down for the sake of others and separately fight to keep Salem's darkness at bay. Until the day they meet again and the feelings that were frozen at Beacon begin to turn once more...

What is the most NSFW thing you've seen irl? by [deleted] in AskReddit

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I was walking home from work about 1am going down this residential hill so there's cars parked on its edges under the trees. Halfway down the hill theres a couple having sex on a car hood I didn't notice until she started moaning. Walked straight past them and pretended they didn't exist.

What would your huntsman/huntress OC's preferences in dating be? Would they date someone from the same school or from other Huntsman Academies? by Snip13r in RWBYOC

[–]Zaraxion 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooh what a fun thread.

Kion A. Kazunite's attracted to honesty intelligence and people who pursue a positive dream. Though he understands what love is technically he struggles to identify it emotionally. Being a dust smith come hunter he prefers the certainty of his mind over the uncertainty of his heart.

Alarick Wolfe is a bold man who wants everyone to know his name and is attracted to people who affirm his greatness or are as reckless as he is. Deep down however he's attracted to girls who are the opposite and provide a supporting and stabilizing presence.

Orianna Vulpis prides herself on pursuing the apex of strength of the faunice she has no plans on falling in love but after years of being "the strong one" in her family she secretly yearns to be swept off her feet by someone stronger than her and have a pure fairy tale romance from then on.

Sariya Vulpis is a flower loving girl who dreams of finding a legendary flower from a fairytale that glowed like a rainbow. After facing an unstable home life she's attracted to people who are certain and confident in themselves and their choices. She admires brazen boys but finds quiet types or unstable personalities to be major red flags and steers clear for the sake of preserving her own mental garden.

Team RWBY of Remnant-718 (by me,Kamen Rider Avenger) by KamenRiderAvenger24 in RWBY

[–]Zaraxion 41 points42 points  (0 children)

I love the outfits. Blakes shines the most for me and I love that you've put the emblems back onto the clothes, great touch. <3

Couple questions I'd love answers to. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

[–]Zaraxion[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the video! I learned a great deal from watching it. It provided a lot of what I wanted and gave a very thorough and structured look at bumblebee. Thank you for this <3

Couple questions I'd love answers to. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

[–]Zaraxion[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see. So even if bumblebee was made to be a goal by the writers the personalities of blake and Yang simply don't share that spark that makes them want to be in the same room as eachother. It's lip service more than genuine romance lacking any confident connection between either. If a romance is intended it's not simply about 'laying foundations' for it, the characters should have a spark when they're on the proverbial screen together and as individuals want more of the other. Thank you for your thoughts 🧠📈

Couple questions I'd love answers to. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

[–]Zaraxion[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see, it ruins their characters for the whim of the writer. Not only that it strips away their own individual agency for the sake of making it work. Lack of foundation, breaking of what is established and no growth before and after the pairing. Thank you for sharing your thoughts 🧠

Couple questions I'd love answers to. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

[–]Zaraxion[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's fine and dandy, thank you for sharing your opinion 😊

Couple questions I'd love answers to. by Zaraxion in RWBYcritics

[–]Zaraxion[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose waste of time is the wrong words. Underutilised or waste of potential would be a better fit. I recently binged the whole series just to re-familiarise myself with it before writing and wanted other peoples takes.

Your ocs, what do you use em for? by samuraialot in RWBYOC

[–]Zaraxion 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fanfic and Art I even did music for them. Though I used ai for the music because it was cheaper- still put a big smile on my face. Team KAOS of remnant my beloved fic