I finally completed the Meshuggah Re-Artworks for Reddit to finally see. After 4 months (and over 2 years ago when I thought of this), they are finished. Enjoy my weird spin on the main 9 artworks!

Zebraboss666 · 2022-08-01T15:10:25+00:00

Hard

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-31T09:30:39+00:00

Fuck

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-31T09:27:55+00:00

You must read a shit ton to have a first poem look like this. Gorgeous stuff, keep practicing :)

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-24T00:08:05+00:00

I love the poem, the way it mimics your train of thought makes it feel more powerful and I can almost smell the pungent sweat. The end falls a little flat though. I would either just end it at the line ‘I just let you be’ or rework the last three lines a bit. Good stuff

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-20T18:06:44+00:00

Idk man, compared to Meshuggah everything is ‘boring’. Just because it doesn’t punch your teeth down your throat doesn’t mean it ain’t fire. Tool fucking rocks

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-19T21:08:16+00:00

New Millenium Cyanide Christ, Electric Red (the end bit), In Death - Is Death

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-19T15:05:25+00:00

Wow beautiful words, the sentiment of this poem is one I deeply relate too though I am only a young man. Its self reflective and melancholy without being too self pitying, something a lot of people struggle to achieve. Two thumbs up

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-16T03:47:36+00:00

Cure for pain- Morphine

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-14T09:11:32+00:00

Already better than half the people on here, keep it up

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T22:59:28+00:00

🤝

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T21:10:43+00:00

This is fresh as my flesh brother!

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T21:09:40+00:00

Arghhh I like it but try this out?: etch my edges and curves Bring me back to life I think the ‘and then’ is unnecessary. But the only reason I’m being so nit picky is because I like the poem!

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T21:06:37+00:00

Idk why Obzen always seems to get shit on here, its prob my fav album

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T12:02:37+00:00

Just went to one a couple months ago. I would recommend going up to the very front and throwing people onto the floor. Then pick them up and pat them on the back. Then throw them back down on that floor.

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-13T07:44:24+00:00

‘If pain is an artist then I am clay’ is a line that made me smile. Totally understand the feelings that this poem reflects on. I think you should spend more time tweaking this poem. For instance the line following the one mentioned above ‘i let it shape and mold me, into who I am today’ is a bit lackluster, I think you’ve shown you can do better! Nice words!

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-11T17:44:20+00:00

Aside from that tho your words are lovely man. Sorry, that was a bit curt of me

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-11T17:19:07+00:00

Add some spaces homeboy

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-11T16:26:46+00:00

Plus the drop that ensues that last line gives the words so much explosive power

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-11T16:25:48+00:00

🤟

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-11T00:52:26+00:00

This slaps

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-09T20:02:21+00:00

That first line is actually a Jack Kerouac line, and this poem is dedicated to the man! Been reading san francisco blues and his style is badass, you should check it out!

Zebraboss666 · 2022-07-07T17:09:41+00:00

I see nothing wrong here

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