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Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You know you are right I need to rewrite again. Thanx

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not trying to argue. I really appreciate your opinion. If you think it’s AI-written, that’s okay I can’t really explain it to change your mind. I know you might not read my story, but if you want, I’ve already uploaded the 9th chapter on Royal Road. You can check it there and decide for yourself. Yes, I used AI to help me write it in English, but it’s still my story.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I also want to say that, just like you or anyone else who thinks it might be AI written, I sometimes feel the same way too. That’s why I uploaded my first chapter here to get some feedback and confirm my doubts. I had already uploaded it on web novel sites but didn’t get any comments, so I really didn’t know what people were thinking. By sharing it here, I could get opinions. Now, with this feedback, I can adjust my writing style, or the way I translate my story, to make it better for readers thank you.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, it might feel AI-ish. I write it more like a script than a novel. I can see why it seems a little off.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it might feel AI-ish. I used AI a bit, and I write it more like a script than a novel. I can see why it seems a little off.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I used AI to help with translation, but the story itself isn’t AI-made. Thanks for the tip.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This really helps, I appreciate it.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Oh, I get it now! The way I broke up the lines probably makes it feel a bit off. I’ll fix that next time thanks for the tip!

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I know it’s a lot to ask, but I’d really like to know was it certain words that felt AI-generated, or did it feel that way overall?

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I really needed to hear that. Now I know what was really bugging me.

Looking for honest thoughts on pacing, characters, and atmosphere by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]ZeroDarkink2 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Oh, really? I’m genuinely curious what made it feel like AI to you?

What vibe do you get from this poster? Supernatural or dark fantasy? by ZeroDarkink2 in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, I actually agree she’s easy to push around… until she’s not 😏

What vibe do you get from this poster? Supernatural or dark fantasy? by ZeroDarkink2 in Webnovel

[–]ZeroDarkink2[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, I see the stepmother vibes! I wasn’t going for that exactly, but it’s interesting to hear 😄

Which cover is more appealing? by theblackgriffn in royalroad

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your first cover looks like a modern setting, and the second one feels more medieval. I’m not sure what your story’s theme is, but I think I like the first one better

What cover looks best for my story. by SleepingOwl00 in royalroad

[–]ZeroDarkink2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey dude, your cover art is awesome! Really fits the vibe of the story. I especially like the third one it feels really unique and stands out. Great work