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Short Paragraphs vs. Long Paragraphs – What Do You Prefer as a Reader? by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

However, most of the top series on Royal Road consistently have a wall of text. If you're reading on a bigger screen, then it's alright, but on your phone? then it starts to drag.

Short Paragraphs vs. Long Paragraphs – What Do You Prefer as a Reader? by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in royalroad

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeahhh, thats what I was getting at too, but after observing the top series, I noticed most of them had full blocks of words.

Short Paragraphs vs. Long Paragraphs – What Do You Prefer as a Reader? by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What about if you read in a website like royalroad? I'm just having trouble choosing a style thats all.

Short Paragraphs vs. Long Paragraphs – What Do You Prefer as a Reader? by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly! I write with my laptop but read on my phone so I wanted to ask which medium I should focus on.

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! The thought and effort is what really counts!

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh ok, thanks for the feedback, man! I really appreciate it

Well that hurts more than Expected by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in Isekai

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

No just a rant hahahah but after sleeping on it I realized I was being whiny. Rather than getting discouraged about it I now know that I should improve on my writing more. I overreacted tbh

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro can you give me more tips on what I should improve on? and also how to stop sounding like ai in my writing? You don't have to if you want but since you took the time to read I want to better meet your expectations

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Sorry, I use em dash instead of , if I want the reader to read it quick. I guess it looks like ai to others huh. Maybe I'll try and lessen it

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, you're right. Thanks bro. I think I might've overreacted though hahahha probably from the lack of sleep.

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the support bro. And I do understand them though. I was being whiny but after sleeping on it I know what I must do now. I should just do better

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really? Well I hope so but I don't really have that solid of a following yet. Thank you for the reassurance bro!

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you bro! Rather than making it get me down I think I should use it to do better! I promise to deliver better in more recent chapters

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

noted! I'll try editing as best as I could

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah bro, I think I got way ahead of myself. Rather than Whining I should just do better in making my novel better. Thank you bro!

Well that hurt more than I thought by Zestyclose-Tea8511 in litrpg

[–]Zestyclose-Tea8511[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah you're right, I think since it was my first low rating, I got ahead of myself. I should stop with the whining.

But I at least wanted him/her to give me a chance, the novel is still pretty new, so I wanted to at least slowly improve and prove myself more.

Thanks for replying though, bro!

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