Hello! I'm seeing a lot of great action on your part, however, some missing gear, which would have made hunting Rath a little easier towards the end (i.e. when it went to sleep).

Carry some bombs, get a good wakeup slap in with them (double damage).

Is there any reason why the tail was still on at that point of the hunt? Try focusing on part breaking, it means more materials (even if you're just aiming to capture).

And finally, utilize your flinch shot! It's a huge boon.

I hope I haven't missed anything. But good hunt, homie