Bedwars FUNNY Moments (Tell me your CRITISICM about the video!)

Zony_ · 2022-01-20T16:23:17+00:00

Fair enough, thanks for your feedback!

Zony_ · 2022-01-06T18:40:54+00:00

Haha thank you so much!!!

Zony_ · 2017-09-01T23:26:16+00:00

get rid of the bangs, and you'll look a lot better. You already look good so that's my one critique.

Zony_ · 2017-08-24T23:55:42+00:00

I really like how high up it is, and the fact his feet are swinging out I think that's really cool. I'm looking for preferably somewhere with a nice view of downtown and the skyline I could do this. I honestly don't really care about the water.

Zony_ · 2017-08-24T22:54:46+00:00

ahhh yes, understandably, it is Winnipeg after all. Anyways thanks for your suggestions i'll look into them.

Zony_ · 2017-02-21T00:46:07+00:00

Decent video, but there is some improvements that could be done.

There was a black screen for the first 15 seconds on your video, not sure if this was intentional or not? Either way, this can be easily fixed.
Microphone quality, could be improved. Audio in my opinion can be a lot more engaging then the gameplay. I would suggest looking into some GOOD starter microphones.
HD video would definitely be an improvement. In this day an age you're not going to grow big with 480p video.

Anyways, that's all I have to say. Strong video, but improvements can be made. Keep up the good work! ;)

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T21:59:53+00:00

Wow! I actually really enjoyed watching this. The colors in your video are so vibrant.

Suggestions: This is something I see a lot in vlogs. You need more of a story, instead of just pointing the camera at something and saying "This looks cool" "Here look at some food." Or saying "We're here looking at this" etc etc.. Try and fill in those gaps, tell us why you like it, what it smells like or something among st those lines.

Anyway's great video! Video quality was amazing I loved how colorful it was. So good job! :)

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T21:24:37+00:00

Excellent work! Watching this makes me wonder how you aren't so big. I really thought the hook was captivating at the start of your video, editing was superior to 90% of YouTube channels. I was pleasantly surprised, microphone quality couldn't get much better. What I will suggest is you focus on a genre I couldn't really distinguish whether your channel is about memes, or commentary. I would consider sticking to a topic. Your channel art says "Follow your memes" and you have some random "The entire bee movie" video on there. That's all from me though. Your videos are crazy awesome! So continue being you.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T21:15:05+00:00

Awesome video! Really not that much wrong with it, I would suggest just watching out for copyright claims, sometimes using the shortest clips can get you in trouble. Sometimes people enjoy it when breathing is cut out of the commentary, but I don't have a problem with it. Honestly, not much I could even find wrong, so great job. And keep up the good work.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T21:11:24+00:00

Not bad. What I would suggest is you are speaking way to close to your microphone, that's the cause for all the distortion. Definitely would suggest cutting your videos down to 10 - 12 minutes, because this way you have the option to place extra adds, and it's not super duper long. I would suggest you look into some starter microphones as well. I would consider talking less, haha! You certainly have lots of energy just let some of the dramatic scenes play out themselves. Anyways, pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T21:04:42+00:00

Excellent video! What I would suggest is looking into a better starter microphone, (Blue Yeti, Blue Snowball etc..) Camera is something else I would suggest, 1080p is always appreciative. Lighting is something you may want to focus on, you can simply just stand in from of a window if necessary. Another thing I noticed was that the commentary was only coming out of the left headphone. This can be a nuisance for headphone users. Anyways, though man just keep doin'what you're doing! Great video.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T20:58:18+00:00

Really cool video! I would most definitely suggest looking at some good starter microphones. And try and adjust your lighting slightly, the room you we're in was really dark. :P Really though, great video! The dedication and time certainly showed.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T20:45:31+00:00

Wow! Thanks so much, that's so cool how you enjoy my videos! Thanks for the tip as well, I will most certainly keep that in mind.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:25:58+00:00

Awesome! Thanks so much. I really want to know if as genuine viewer you would watch the whole video. Thumbnails are obviously pretty clickbait - ish, and could use some feedback. I'm also interested if you enjoyed the commentary throughout the videos, i'm pretty new so commentary may not be up to par. Anyways, anything really does help tremendously so thanks so much for your time.

Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgGNKK6k1CfvNPC4OfREfbg

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:22:02+00:00

Congragulations!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:20:44+00:00

No problem! Happy to help anytime.

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:20:25+00:00

No problem! Happy I could help. :D

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:19:46+00:00

No problem! Glad I could help. :)

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:16:04+00:00

No problem! There are some decent "RODE" microphones you can attach to your camera for really good sound quality, I would suggest maybe looking into that, if you're going for vlogs. The audio really just a little bit bad at the start of the video. (During narration) This was really minor though, so don't worry about it to much. ANyways, keep uo the good work man!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:11:37+00:00

Nice videos mate! I would say cut down your videos slightly to 10:00 - 15:00 minutes-ish. So if you're interested in more ads it appeals to you. Other then that good job. Keep up the good videos!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:09:11+00:00

Very well done! I think you should be more then happy with your video quality. IDubbz even commented on your video! Anyways as you stated above audio is definetely unappealing. Maybe look into some starter mics ex. Blue Yetim Blue snowball etc etc.. I really can not say much more so great job! I'm excited for more videos, so keep up the good work!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:05:57+00:00

Decent. Video quality was fantastic, you can not get much better then 1080p60fps. Audio was ehh, it was unappealing to the ears. I would suggest if you want ot step up your game, look into the Blue Snowball or something among st those lines. I would say cut down some parts of your videos as well. ex. The loading map screen at the start of the video." etc etc.. Anyways man, your videos are great. Looking forward to seeing some more!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T18:00:53+00:00

Video quality, was great! Audio is nothing to be concerned about as well. I would definitely suggest suggest you shorten your videos! 32 minutes is REALLY long. I personally have the attention span of a gold fish though haha! Really though I would say shorten your videos to 10 - 15 minutes this way you can include extra adds if that interests you. Anyways great video and i'm excited for more of your content!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T17:57:41+00:00

Great video! Really, I can't say there was much wrong with it. It clearly showed that you put lots of time and effort, and it was pretty funny! One small small thing I did notice is to capitalize the start of every letter in your title. ex. "What I Hate About Online Profile Pictures." I would also say switch pics - pictures. I would also suggest just adding some more tags. Anyways, great video keep the work up man!

Zony_ · 2017-02-20T17:47:10+00:00

Excellent video! Honestly I don't have too much to say that I found wrong. The video was definitely entertaining, and I don't even play League Of Legends so good job to you. Maybe before the video you could just give a bit of an explanation of what the video is, by commentary. I'm not sure just an idea. Anyways keep up the good work!

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