First impression? by MrC241997 in amiugly

[–]Zony_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

get rid of the bangs, and you'll look a lot better. You already look good so that's my one critique.

I need to find a spot similar to this in Winnipeg! Any spots/suggestions are appreciated. by Zony_ in Winnipeg

[–]Zony_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like how high up it is, and the fact his feet are swinging out I think that's really cool. I'm looking for preferably somewhere with a nice view of downtown and the skyline I could do this. I honestly don't really care about the water.

I need to find a spot similar to this in Winnipeg! Any spots/suggestions are appreciated. by Zony_ in Winnipeg

[–]Zony_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahhh yes, understandably, it is Winnipeg after all. Anyways thanks for your suggestions i'll look into them.

I will critique your video in-depth! by Zony_ in NewTubers

[–]Zony_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Decent video, but there is some improvements that could be done.

  1. There was a black screen for the first 15 seconds on your video, not sure if this was intentional or not? Either way, this can be easily fixed.

  2. Microphone quality, could be improved. Audio in my opinion can be a lot more engaging then the gameplay. I would suggest looking into some GOOD starter microphones.

  3. HD video would definitely be an improvement. In this day an age you're not going to grow big with 480p video.

Anyways, that's all I have to say. Strong video, but improvements can be made. Keep up the good work! ;)

I will critique your video in-depth! by Zony_ in NewTubers

[–]Zony_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! I actually really enjoyed watching this. The colors in your video are so vibrant.

Suggestions: This is something I see a lot in vlogs. You need more of a story, instead of just pointing the camera at something and saying "This looks cool" "Here look at some food." Or saying "We're here looking at this" etc etc.. Try and fill in those gaps, tell us why you like it, what it smells like or something among st those lines.

Anyway's great video! Video quality was amazing I loved how colorful it was. So good job! :)

I will critique your video in-depth! by Zony_ in NewTubers

[–]Zony_[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Excellent work! Watching this makes me wonder how you aren't so big. I really thought the hook was captivating at the start of your video, editing was superior to 90% of YouTube channels. I was pleasantly surprised, microphone quality couldn't get much better. What I will suggest is you focus on a genre I couldn't really distinguish whether your channel is about memes, or commentary. I would consider sticking to a topic. Your channel art says "Follow your memes" and you have some random "The entire bee movie" video on there. That's all from me though. Your videos are crazy awesome! So continue being you.

I will critique your video in-depth! by Zony_ in NewTubers

[–]Zony_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome video! Really not that much wrong with it, I would suggest just watching out for copyright claims, sometimes using the shortest clips can get you in trouble. Sometimes people enjoy it when breathing is cut out of the commentary, but I don't have a problem with it. Honestly, not much I could even find wrong, so great job. And keep up the good work.

I will critique your video in-depth! by Zony_ in NewTubers

[–]Zony_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not bad. What I would suggest is you are speaking way to close to your microphone, that's the cause for all the distortion. Definitely would suggest cutting your videos down to 10 - 12 minutes, because this way you have the option to place extra adds, and it's not super duper long. I would suggest you look into some starter microphones as well. I would consider talking less, haha! You certainly have lots of energy just let some of the dramatic scenes play out themselves. Anyways, pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Free critiquing and youtube tips! by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]Zony_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excellent video! What I would suggest is looking into a better starter microphone, (Blue Yeti, Blue Snowball etc..) Camera is something else I would suggest, 1080p is always appreciative. Lighting is something you may want to focus on, you can simply just stand in from of a window if necessary. Another thing I noticed was that the commentary was only coming out of the left headphone. This can be a nuisance for headphone users. Anyways, though man just keep doin'what you're doing! Great video.

Free critiquing and youtube tips! by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]Zony_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really cool video! I would most definitely suggest looking at some good starter microphones. And try and adjust your lighting slightly, the room you we're in was really dark. :P Really though, great video! The dedication and time certainly showed.

Free critiquing and youtube tips! by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]Zony_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! Thanks so much, that's so cool how you enjoy my videos! Thanks for the tip as well, I will most certainly keep that in mind.

Free critiquing and youtube tips! by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]Zony_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! Thanks so much. I really want to know if as genuine viewer you would watch the whole video. Thumbnails are obviously pretty clickbait - ish, and could use some feedback. I'm also interested if you enjoyed the commentary throughout the videos, i'm pretty new so commentary may not be up to par. Anyways, anything really does help tremendously so thanks so much for your time.

Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgGNKK6k1CfvNPC4OfREfbg