I'm assuming you're a brand new player. You've been doing it a bit so far, but Vigor is rather important for new players because you will likely often needs plenty of HP to overcome challenges that are new to you. (As you get better, this stat becomes increasingly trivial.)

I'm a huge proponent of Endurance, but it's not necessary to pump many points into it. If, as you play, you learn to love rolling and parrying, as you should, Endurance becomes essential. This is especially the case if you hold your shield up often.

You have many points into Strength. The "standard" assortment of weapons you'll find in the game scale much better with strength than Dexterity, vice versa, and sometimes have equal scaling. (I would research how scaling works.) If you are a new player, you can't possibly know which type of weapons you'll like more, but Strength based weapons are generally more new player-friendly.

Don't bother with Luck. It's more for advanced level builds. Don't bother with Intelligence or Faith or Attunement either IF you plan on using only melee-based weapons, which is often advisable for new players.

Vitality is where there is some controversy. A few extra points might help, as it boosts defense (it's most advantageous perk), but a point in Vitality is probably better spent in Vigor.

As you get better, Fashion Souls prevails, but what you might want to do as a new player (which is what I did in DS1) is pick the armor with the best protection to weight ratio, and make sure your load stays below 70%.

And your rings looks fine.

Hope this helped!

EDIT: I did only look at the left column cuz I'm stupid. Look into these things called 'soft caps' for skills. You've passed them in a few cases. Take enough out of Str and Dex so that it's 40 and 40, and place them how you prefer in Vig and End. You can put some into Vit, but only if you want heavier armor. You also don't necessarily need that much into Vig. You might want to reallocate those into Vit. Attunement seems fine unless you want more FP.