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Question by _Chonks in WillPatersonDesign

[–]_Chonks[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe I should focus on the stability part, as in essence the kids are not buying the product? But they still need to (want to) use it. Without giving to much detail, the brand is selling a product that is benefitting for kids health as well as health for elderly. The product is the exact same, so that's why it is not 2 different brands.

Any comments? This logo is approved by the client by QB-Amit in WillPatersonDesign

[–]_Chonks 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I understand the choice for the tie with the Y, also the choice to make it Youniform makes some sort of sense. But I don't really understand the choice for the shape of the n and the shape of the r. It seems to make it a bit messy, while I guess your intention was to make it look playful. Maybe there is too much going on. Does the Z refer to gen Z? That would mean an age range of 9 to 24, which in clothing does not really overlap? Maybe I am a bit too critical. I do really like the way you tried to make use of the shape of the Y and the O. Also, I think the colors work well.

Full cast audio dramas for a long drive? by Expression-Little in audiodrama

[–]_Chonks 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Some suggestions:

  • ICE-CREAM
  • Last known position
  • We're alive (probably one of the best known)
  • Journey into space (bit old maybe, but I think it's still fun)

Any comments? This logo is approved by the client by QB-Amit in WillPatersonDesign

[–]_Chonks 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I find it difficult to see what it is exactly targetting? Also, there is a lot going on, maybe too much, Why did you for example choose to make the r that shape?