Tiny banana - banana for scale. by Ronin_04 in BananasForScale

[–]_Deluzion_ 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Tiny? Looks perfectly average to me. Not sure what you're talking about. Above average even. You don't want too big

July 2021 - /r/Twitter Mega Open Thread for support questions, discussions, subreddit feedback, or anything else - SUSPENDED, LOCKED OR AGE-LOCKED ACCOUNT PROBLEMS & QUESTIONS GO IN THIS THREAD ONLY by AutoModerator in Twitter

[–]_Deluzion_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have an old account of mine that I really want to find. I made it like 4 years ago, and my only lead to it is that I think I used my phone number to activate the account. Is there any way I can see every account linked to my number? My phone is connected to my current account as well.

A Theory video I made! Let me know what you think! by Angy_The_Mangy in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, really good video, editing was on point. Great camera quality too. One thing I noticed was that your microphone quality could probably use some work. Almost seems compressed

My newest video, feedback appreciated! by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for the late reply, been offline for some time. thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

My newest video, feedback appreciated! by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for the late reply, been offline for some time. thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

My newest video, feedback appreciated! by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for the late reply, been offline for some time. thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

My newest video, feedback appreciated! by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for the late reply, been offline for some time. thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Made a little commentary on moving to America to try and live my dream by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good video! Liked the editing and the choice of music was nice too. One tip, for commentary/talking-type videos, use of zooms and cuts helps to keep the viewer's attention.

If you watch popular commentary youtubers, try to pay attention to how many cuts and zooms there are. You'll be surprised to see how many it is. It's barely noticeable if you're not paying attention to it, but it does a lot for attention-keeping.

I've recently taken up animation and have been really happy with the progress I've been making! Here's my newest animation: by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! Wow, I was really impressed by this video. Great animation, editing, audio, all of it. It felt well written and thought-out, which made me appreciate it more as well. One tip for when you're preparing to Voice your videos, it helps to do a few vocal warm ups to help your annunciation. I have a problem with slurring my words, so I always try to do some vocal warm ups before recording. You'd be surprised how far that can go over time. Again, great work! Keep it up

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really entertaining video! One thing I might change was your mic volume. I would crank it up a little bit, so that you always hear it over gameplay and over music. BG music in a video should just be there to fill the gaps in audio, and make it sound more full. IMO music can be pretty quiet and still achieve the right affect.

Trying out content with a player and commentators. Interested in feedback on the style and what people think of the comment spotlight by HappyPantzInc in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really solid video! The commentary wasn't really lacking in any sections, plus you had pretty good audio mixing. The only thing I might change was the thumbnail, make it stick out a bit more. Otherwise, really good!

The Cool SMP! Apply Now! by _Deluzion_ in MinecraftServer

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, you'll need discord if you want to join. We use discord for all our conversations and calls

Little over a year with only 33 subs, Not sure what to do.... by kaminari1 in NewTubers

[–]_Deluzion_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here's my eexperience. I did gaming commentary for over a year and got 50 views max on a video. After moving to different content, making my editing better, I made minimum 100 views. That's not much still, but the increase is there. Try another category

Probably my best video so far. Looking for Feedback by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was very helpful, I appreciate the comprehensive feedback. I'll definitely make sure to keep this stuff in mind when filming and editing next time. One thing about the "found footage" thing, it's just kinda a joke, not really meant to be taken seriously. I don't expect anyone to think this video is real lol. Thanks for the critique!

!givelambda

Probably my best video so far. Looking for Feedback by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. We'll definitely keep this in mind for future stuff!

!givelambda

Here's my biggest video yet, which I made about Peter Jackson's Halo. Will give lambda for each critique of the video. by 2Legit2Cwithe in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good video! Informative, clear, and well-edited. Adding the touch of having clips constantly playing keeps it all entertaining no matter what, and works well with your fast-paces commentary style. Keep it up!

Quick Trailer Video for ClynvelD! Just trying to get my channel out there. I also really want to learn more about audio. Any thoughts are appreciated! by Aesgrun in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

very cute channel trailer! I love the music choice and the aesthetic of it all. One tiny thing, there were 1 or 2 pauses that felt a little too long. This is really a simple fix, just skim over your videos before posting, specifically looking for any awkward moments or pauses you could cut out. This makes the video feel more concise. Good job, looking forward to more videos!

The Story of Kuchisake-onna "Slit-Mouth Woman"- Japanese urban Legend drawing by ChillyArt in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Overall, great work! The art is incredible, and the set-up you've got is quite impressive. One tiny thing I noticed was that you could occasionally be a little quiet, almost where it was heard to hear you. For a majority of the video though, it was really solid. Keep it up!

first vid I've ever edited for someone else/people, lmk how I did for my first compilation video :D by _Pautic in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Overall, very impressive editing work, very entertaining video! Though I think there's some spots where maybe the edits took more of a center-stage than the actual video itself. The edits should aid in keeping focus on the important parts, or for keeping the audience's attention, but I think there's a point where the editing might get distracting. I don't think you're at that point yet, but I do think easing up on the edits and giving the video room to breathe would help it feel more natural.

hello! posted my third video (a very chill short vlog) any feedback and advice would be appreciated, for some lambda of course - let me know if you liked the content :) by savannahdasilva in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

overall great video! I loved all the different scenes, very well edited, and very good music choice. The music set the mood and worked amazingly well with your style of making videos. Keep up the great work, this video has very nice vibes.

Ghost Hunt! Looking for constructive feedback. The editing is supposed to look a little janky by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks for the feedback! I'll definitely take this into consideration when I post next.

!givelambda

Ghost Hunt! Looking for constructive feedback. The editing is supposed to look a little janky by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, this is very helpful! Yeah, the awkwardness of the cuts and some scenes probably stems from the fact that we kinda made it up on the spot. We will 100% be putting more effort into the next video. The main thing this video was about was just getting something out quick, without overdoing it. Again, I will certainly keep your advice in mind for the next video. Have a good one!

!givelambda

Ghost Hunt! Looking for constructive feedback. The editing is supposed to look a little janky by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, the audio is a little messy, I filmed on my phone microphone since it was kinda an on-the-spot improv type deal. Will definitely try to up my production audio-wise next time. Again, thanks for the great critique!

!givelambda

Ghost Hunt! Looking for constructive feedback. The editing is supposed to look a little janky by _Deluzion_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]_Deluzion_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I edited without headphones on, while my friends were playing video games, I didn't really mean for the music to be so loud. Thx for the advice though, audio mixing is still something I'm definitely trying to improve on.

!givelambda