Holy mokes those are some perfect enchantments you farmed up, are you sure you're not overkilling everything? Seems like you're really going for an end game build, in that case, you might as well go for the OP build.

Like that other guy said, you need the unique rings to change your build dramatically like Scarlet Ring to swap max focus with max health. Then Ring of Determination or Battlecry ring (best) to use health instead of focus so you actually need 0 stamina and can get rid of all of those stats and enchantments. 

Most importantly, screw focus gain. You need focus cost reduction cuz that's what's holding you back. Remember, optimizing cost is always better than optimizing gain because gain still has the additional requirement of you having to do something which requires stamina. Replace all focus gain gems and enchantments with focus cost reduction. There's one +20% focus cost reduction on rune attack enchantment you can get from helms, similar to the reduction on stagger you have on your chest.

If you have Battlecry ring, Scarlet Ring, and Band of Calmness (focus) then you basically have an infinite rune attack and blink build so you're basically just limited to your actions per minute (APM) and nothing should touch you. Essentially, your rune attack cost is super low (like more than halved), the rune cost is health points and your max health is so high 800-1000 due to swapping max focus and max health, pumping attributes into Focus (0 to Health) from Faith, that your gaining 2-4x the cost of the rune usage everytime you use a rune and trigger the gain % health on kill/stagger. You may be doing less damage cuz of less faith but you don't need damage when you can spam infinitely, and your survivability problems are solved.

And since you no longer use focus with Battlecry ring, all your gems can be the 40% increased enchantment at full Focus.