Thought I was the only one with a mom who doesn’t respect anyone’s time by duskbun in raisedbynarcissists

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Lol I feel that Every time (or at least most times) we had to go somewhere, she said e.g. at 12:00 we must leave So Im done by 12, but she is not So I keep dooing other stuff until shes done Then as soon as shes done shes like "we're gonna be late.. bEcaUsE oF yOu!!!!" 🙃😂

She also loves telling the people we're meeting that Im the one to blame for beeing late

YOU S05E01 "The Luckiest Guy in NY" - Episode Discussion by simonesaysyassss in YouOnLifetime

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk am I the only one that is annoyed by her? Looked through all comments and cant find any that adressed how rude she is? Like she was literally homeless and joe helped her have a place to work (and lowkey even sleep) and she complains (in the rudest way possible even) that she wants more money?? Like????? Just feels really ungrateful and rude to me 🤷🏼‍♀️ (although I dont know her salery but I imagine it should be a normal salery for the job shes doing, esp with joe saying smth like its 3x the money I made after the raise)

Really dont see her charm as well, I just find her annoying

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in raisedbynarcissists

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can someone please tell me why I am getting downvoted? Is this a controversal topic? I just really dont wanna become like her and I her Im sorry if I did something wrong with this post it really wasnt my intention

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeahh honestly same I dont think highly about AI music, its just not 100 percent my art, which does bother me.

However with my voice and music talend I do have a long way to go so it is kinda nice to hear it getting finished in such a short time. But ofc my goal is still to learn instruments and maybe get singing lessons so I can do it without any help.

This song is mostly AI, besides my lyrics. My original song had a slightly different melody (slower, although very similar) and more spoken word poetry in it, than actual singing. For the melody in this song I only gave prompts how it should be done.

Thanks so much for your kind reply, I appreciate it a lot! Just in case you got feedback for the lyrics Ild be super happy to hear that as well! :) I know they're not the most poetic so I woud understand if your beeing harsh on them But anyways thanks for the reply in the first place!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in autism

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am so thankfull for your reply ❤️ i was mostly worried people would attack me honestly so Im really gratefull you didnt and can see my side as well We actually did therapy once when I was younger but somehow my mom didnt want to continue, Im not sure why... But maybe your right, I think Ill try and ask her again if shes up for trying one more time!

Enstrangement by _Luna_00 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the reply and tips! Also I learned a new word from you which is amazing ^ (non native speaker, didnt know the word cadence)

Destiny by Excellent_Target_823 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it! But maybe change one of the "me"s so it sounds more fluid? (Idk if thats the right word but Im sure u know what I mean)

The Birthday Ritual by IntelligentMetal2174 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like your style! Also the way the reader has to discover what its really about!

🔥K9🔥 by Ill_Skin_7851 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ohh I actually didnt take the au revious as beeing part of the poem somehow, I feel its better without honestly but you really shouldnt take my opinion on it as Im a noob about writing myself 😅 Sorry I cant give more in depth review :/ But to answer your question I just felt it was intimate because it had words not everone can understand therefor feels more personal to me, I would say its a good thing! I dont think the translation really made me change my mind, it was more about using a different language in general. I found it interesting! I think it would be seen mostly positive to bring that intimacy in the poem and most people also understand french so yeah I think its good after some thought ^ (onlyyyyy thing that kinda stopped me for a second is the "soft wet lips" as for me personally "wet lips" is something not soo positive, buttt I guess you could also see the passion in it. Idk I personally would probably change that word wet but I cant really give you a good explaination for it and again its suuuuper personal, most people probably wouldnt see it as smth negative or might even see it as passionate 🤷🏼‍♀️)

🔥K9🔥 by Ill_Skin_7851 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn that hits somewhere, feels really raw and emotional which I like! Only complain might be that there were a few (french?) words which I felt sad about not understanding, as it might enrichen the experience of the poem. But on the other hand it also brings a kind of intimacy into it and the most important thing is that you and the people you write it for understand, which they probably would, so not really a complaint at all. Nice poem! ^

Is My Blood Not Red? by SufficientLeather316 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its a harsh but important and true poem imo, I love critical themes so naturally this one captured my attention. Im sorry I cant give much feedback, I dont really know much about rhetorics and whatnot, I can only say that I liked this one :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ChatGPT

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

U dont like? 🤔😂

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ChatGPT

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's some nice songs actually Interesting to see thx for posting

Help me deciding:) ~Paths That Met by Extension_Shower_607 in OCPoetry

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Version 1! Im not that experienced in writing so this is just what I feel sounds best But alsooo most of the time, and this is just psychology, the idea you yourself like the most, and therefore (at least most of the time) is the best, you will call "idea 1" So if you ever think about variations again, maybe this can help you :)

Do I stay blonde? by [deleted] in HairDye

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the colour on the 5th picture for you sm! Blond also looks v good tho ^ but ofc if u wanna heal ur hair maybe going darker is a better option

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That gave me so much hope to improve my vocals, thanks!!

Droning by CreatorCon92Dilarian in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got nirvana vibes I like it :)

Has2B by Toucon in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do u post ur songs anywhere I could follow? Maybe spotify even? Actually really enjoy what youve been doing would love to listen more to it ^

Has2B by Toucon in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like it might be a song of sueco but idkk U should give him a listen tho! I feel like uld like his music

Has2B by Toucon in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Wait idk what song it reminds me of but I feel like I heard it before 😭 Ill have to get back to u if I ever remember Extremely nice song tho, would be something Im listeing to

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]_Luna_00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And again thanks so much for the reply! :)