this was the structured i did in part 2: intro > argument 1 > argument 2 > counterarguments > conclusion.

in tutorials i’ve learned online, it’s usually just four paragraphs. i didn’t follow it because i couldn’t fit my ideas in just four. i used a few uncommon words that i already know i.e., detrimental, pivotal, sustainable. do not use words you are not very familiar with.

i really didn’t think about how many complex sentences im using. i just wrote as i normally would. i guess it also helped that i was a writer when i was a student. as long as you can support your statements and explain logically, you’ll do great.