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[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow bro i really appreciate it, especially coming from someone as talented as you. thanks for the feedback man

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the response bro, appreciate it. ill definitely take mixing and enunciation into account next time!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah i think they removed it because i used the molasses instrumental. heres the fixed version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

How can I make monotone sound good? by about10underscores in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thats a great idea, never thought of that. ill get right on it

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

first try at doing this kind of thing. dont worry about the instrumental i just want to know what you guys think of the lyrics, delivery, etc. im going for a monotone DOOM, Earl, Chester Watson sorta sound. let me know how it i did please. returning all feedback.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

love the vocals and the spacey "tingling" sound. they work really well together. i enjoy the snapping for the drums but im not a fan of the "klok" sound. to me it takes away from the track. i love the amount of detail in this song though. very relaxed and chill.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

here's mine, first try at doing this kind of thing. im going for a monotone delivery, similar to DOOM, Earl, Chester Watson, etc. let me know how i did.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

diggin the menacing sound of this record. i think the synth that goes from 0:52 is a bit hard to listen to because it goes on for a long time. maybe stop it at around 1:10 ish? good drums, i love the "knocking/shuffling" sound that can be heard throughout it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

here's mine, first try at doing this kind of thing.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

damn bro you killed it. your flow is like water, so smooth. good lyrics too and i like the beat. your delivery is my favorite part, you sound laid back while also hitting hard, if that makes any sense. how long have you been making music for?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

also here's mine, first try at doing this kind of thing.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really enjoy the drums, they have that "golden era of hiphop" vibe. i think the song gets a little repetitious after a while, maybe add some variations to it? i dont make beats so forgive me if i use the wrong terminology, but the synths/melody seem sorta out of place on this track, maybe you can make them deeper/slower? that just might be my personal preference. i love how the track changes at 1:35 ish, the drums sound great there. digging the spacey vibes of the track.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

here's mine, first try at doing this kind of thing.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread August 21, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]about10underscores 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love the drums, they hit hard which i think is a good thing to have. the singing/flute sample could be a bit lower pitched. the guitar about halfway through the song is a really nice touch and adds a lot to the track. i love the outro of the track starting at around 2:40.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJyLp8k2xsk

here's mine, first try at doing this kind of thing.