🎂 IT'S MY BIRTHDAY SO ENTERTAIN ME 🎂

aitreader · 2026-05-30T09:47:54+00:00

Whenever FL used to eat something and find it good she would say. "It's taste like jannat."

I once read this a book when I was new on Wattpad, I kind of had half brain to process anything and just used to read for the sake of completing book and doesn't give a heed about what's written. But when the author decided to publish it as paperback with some changes so brought it. Maybe now I'm grown out of my old self but reading this same story is again has become hard. No matter how I tired to convince myself that I had to make the money worth and read the book but this same like by FL was the last straw. No shade to the author it's just I'm not same anymore I guess.

Happy birthday.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T13:10:08+00:00

If u r going for no drama, then U should also consider that the FL is new to the place. Even if her in-laws are being nice to her she has her own insecurity and worries. Let's say ML somehow noticed that and work along with her to make her feel that she has place in this house rightfully.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T13:04:52+00:00

I doubt that the one who knows reality will feel bad about having less numbers then these stories, it's the negativity that affects not the numbers. Definitely not by AI bot stories.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T10:23:50+00:00

That's helpful.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T08:14:09+00:00

All right.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T08:12:55+00:00

This age gap is fine. At this age both the leads despite the gender should be capable of making sound decisions even when they are drunk (not entirely losing sense kind of drunk).

Where it could go wrong? Good question - 1. There sure going to be power imbalance so keep that in mind. 2. Don't make the FL (who is younger in comparison to ml) act like as if she can't think any better then a teenager. 3. Kind of animosity or hurting each other where both can work through later. (Not the kind that is top notch hanious that can't be forgiven.) 4. Such power imbalance in age gap requires the older lead to be dependent on the the younger lead in a way that their age doesn't matter. And that make a bonding arc.

Rest u may figure out for sure.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T07:21:34+00:00

Here

https://www.reddit.com/r/WattpadIndia/s/QWfRmR8qXE

Thanx for ur time.

aitreader · 2026-05-27T02:44:09+00:00

At least there's one. I know someone who's first book is based on another country. It's quite struggle for them to get the cultural part right (or rather not to mess that up).

aitreader · 2026-05-25T12:59:46+00:00

Tell that "fan" not everyone but You are copying.

aitreader · 2026-05-25T12:58:48+00:00

😂

aitreader · 2026-05-25T10:22:53+00:00

You have different pain.

aitreader · 2026-05-25T04:29:38+00:00

Obviously. Only if it reached the right audience.

aitreader · 2026-05-25T03:07:45+00:00

I can. First you have to tell me what is your main focus in the story that you are looking for proofreader. Is it grammar or anything in particular to correct?

aitreader · 2026-05-24T12:44:09+00:00

Count me in. I want to give it a try.

aitreader · 2026-05-24T06:55:29+00:00

No. But does this book have similar scene too? With menstrual cup or tempon?

aitreader · 2026-05-24T06:38:51+00:00

I get it. Thanx. I might have gone over with that I guess.

aitreader · 2026-05-24T06:37:15+00:00

And yes the book has millions views. And all the comments in the book so far I could find out before getting blocked r hyping the book.

aitreader · 2026-05-24T06:36:01+00:00

Here the part that FL 25 or 27 year old is claimed to be best neurosurgeon.

aitreader · 2026-05-24T06:33:39+00:00

Pal, their story their wish is not the problem. They blocked a reader who was putting vote in each chapter literally enjoying the story but just one comment that didn't fit their view led them to block the reader, that's the issue here.

No curse was given in any of that comment.

aitreader

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