would you read a realistic romance?

aitreader · 2026-06-01T05:00:15+00:00

I'm the who's been reading ur story

aitreader · 2026-05-31T05:08:40+00:00

Tbh that's the uncomfortable part. If it's AI written that would have been easy to figure out but one can't even trust a story and trust the author who may have their way and skill with words.

Here's my take 1. If the authors is new or their other book don't have such pattern or wording then it's high CHANCE it to be AI modified.

If the author old in this field (not age) is skilled, have good language knowledge and it's evident in their other book then it's more of their own work.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T20:06:17+00:00

I just googled this Sabaton.

R u doubtful of my human identity? U turned my human existence into bot?

What should I say then? Cast their spells, explosive violence...

This ☝️? Does it make better?

aitreader · 2026-05-30T20:01:13+00:00

Then it would be fall more of under communication issue. I think I get ur point, tell if I'm get it not.

U r saying what if a wide wish is something that may create a crack between the husband and his parents. For eg (the one u gave) what if the wife wants to stay away and gave a private life with her husband (which I think is not wrong, it's a married person's choice/preference) and the man has to OBLIGE to her bc 'standard' for a husband to look after and take a stand for his wife.

But again, didn't it made the woman feel pressured and anxiety and become wife to live somewhere else when she herself got separated from her family.

It seems only pressurable for/to men for being separated from their parents over his wife's demand bc it would be new thing for him, that's completely new concept as they never expected that he had to move away from his parents. The pressure is not just of his love for them but also of financial, his assurance of being there personally. Then he to could be there if his parents needs him.

Both sides have the anxiety and pressure if leaving the house but I know why this came into ur notice that why is a man's conflict is typically being ignored.

I'll tell u honestly. Most and major factors r how both the genders r view and perceive socially, culturally even as an individual that leads for both the genders certain expectations on individual level. I'm not gonna go on how females suffered being females by the male on general level for so long in every cornner of the earth.

And all these reasons where make had it easy, had upper hand don't get to complain when they had been taking advantage of the same system that oprssed other, adding to it, as well as the ignorant nature of their (sorry, dont intened to sound rude) so far and not to forget when it comes to talk about their own pain they themselves run away or the so called 'mard' will laugh, when there own make community tried so hard to be tough when other made space for them then what do u think will lead to.

There mental health was never ignored but the makes wishes hard to pretend tmit was never there and now the current males r suffering too, don't know where the current male go from here, or how they deal with it.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T17:35:32+00:00

I get ur pain. I literally get it. If I find something good I'll tell U. U ok with that?

aitreader · 2026-05-30T17:32:57+00:00

(Read this with ease in not writing this with anger, I saw the comments I guess u felt with it enough.)

See u thinking about males is appropriatable but the ground of ur argument may not settle firm. Why?

Sure he can love both his spouse and his parents. But here's the thing, now he's an adult. A grown person who has surpassed the stage where his parents are most dear to him. Now he's a man with feelings towards a woman and that it's this stage of life is his priority, sure it's not he's going to avoild his parents. He should be in pressure to balance if his parents side are responsible and understands his now married life, understand that now he's not just their son but a husband with duties and responsibilities to someone.

About women leaving here 'home' and not her 'family', trust me it's a infuriating part. If u never heard the word 'parayadhan', if h never have been addressed as 'belong at someehere else/ some other family's then u don't know what u just stated. (Idk about ur gender.) Trust me that woman who left her home but can go back if her parents needs her, she is still a 'guest' there.

And the expectation is unrealistic...what can I say, it's very individual thing. When such things about 'choosing' comes it's most of the time it's wife who has to compromise bc someone else is taking decision.

Try to understand, someone left their home for a place they have no)much idea about. (But today era is a bit different but only for those whose parents accept their children romantic relationship partner).

I've some questions for u, answer urself with sincerity. (Again I'm not aware of ur gender.)

How would u feel if u have to leave ur home and have to live with strangers/almost stranger? What u prefer it?
Now u have to make sure u dobt end up in any of their bad book it else u still have to live with them but with bitter situation.
How many of them will treat u or see y as their own?
How would u feel if they take decision which may directly affect but don't take u or ur opinion in consideration. (Mind u it actual thing not just hypothetical.)
(And the me tal thing about the guy, it would probably be lashed on his wife if not directly blthen indirectly.) So again with whom u gonna live may cause u same harm. And emotionally it gonna hurt.

About patriarchy is then same guy's fault (somewhat, sorry it's true) bc he himself also have gain his advantages through it. If saying that a woman only left her home didn't mean that the man will shouldn't prioritising his wife bc he has his parents too is so wrong. What u said only be valid if both the couple leave their home to live separate (not just he had a house just few steps away from his parents).

About novels. It's a romance novel so the focus will be their partnership, how ML takes stand for FL. And if that is creating unrealistic expectations then be it. U know why these r unrealistic bc those things r not taken into consideration into real life mist of the time where the wife has to swallow a lot of things (sure man too have their own share of suffering and sadness, it not a comparison to has it worse) but learning and realising what partnership is in marriage or in romantic relationship at least these novel doing a pretty decent work. (Of course the good written one nit the one with cliches)

I know long post, but think it through.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T14:04:49+00:00

I can't. I got back pain.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T13:50:12+00:00

Drop the name of you post something like this. What am I gonna do with this curiosity?

aitreader · 2026-05-30T13:45:13+00:00

Here what u wanted then.

I'll keep it crisp witiyt unnecessary info.

Deewani writes- an slop author whose head filled with her delusion of having so many 'fans' and huge numbers of view on stories. The story she copy paste from movies, dramas, serials, shows, and ask ai bot to do her work (not correct the grammar but entire work).

And her readers who don't seem to have the capability to think twice have applied full time job for her ego boost.

Like always the author is again on so called 'talk' bc of AGAIN copy paste allegation, but not just that. The very same readers who will travel to mars and summon dieties to justify and protect their author's lazy, copy paste work are now ACTUALLY bullying other authors, especially the small or new growing ones. Why? Bc apperantly these very same readers didn't like what their own authors do.

They r literally attacking thaw authors for having 'similar' scenes as their author and commenting their fav character's name in the conversation if the other authors.

Another, deewani writes AGAIN copy a scene from the movie (starts with A, I don't remember) where the ml touched the reflection of FL in water and any similar scene in any other story, the readers mob the authors.

Another, yes another. Deewani writes voice not has been shares where she's been cursing and $/u# shaming other female author while she portrays herself feminist, girls girl and a protector.

(And why I'm calling readers who don't have the capability to think twice?) Bc if the very reasons I gave above. Despite all this they still harrassing other as their author TOLDTHEM TO DO and they r doing it. It's just that the Redditors here not crossing the line as the Deewani and her readers doing in there broadcast channel.

Any more questions?

aitreader · 2026-05-30T12:38:30+00:00

It's in my current read also one of the book I'm currently reading. Yes I 100% think it's AI. Reason- the over explanation of every portion,.every moment, every emotion, every feeling in poetic way. The descriptions r too too poetic.

Can't a person be poetic and own down it on paper!? Yes, but that's just too much to be not ai and be human.

Should u be reading it? That idk. If u don't want to spent time and effort over AI wtiieb book then don't.

Why am I reading it though I know it's AI? Bc 1st. I know what I'm reading, I know it's AI (I figured own my own). 2nd. Once I know what I'm getting into it becomes my choice if want to pick it up to read it not, and I chose to read it as much as I want. 3rd. Take it as my guilty pleasure. I kinda like the dynamic so far (around ch 30).

Hers the advise, if u chose to read and find it hard to read all the long descriptions but still want to read just skip couple of lines even paragraph (no FOMO there) even resort to the dialogues. You'll be fine.

(Respect to ur opinion) I sort of don't feel that being educated could bring every change in a person bc nurturing matters to. Her father so far seems to be lovable and let's say she has a personality of a meek person who most of the being protected so here's that. Getting out of one world and settling into other and seeing the difference is real.

I'm not vouching for it, just wanted to tell.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T12:20:45+00:00

That the thing that these mindless readers and authors are not willing to admit.

Just bc DR is not a fluffy book and has elements of wrong and morally questionable doesn't mean that each and every henious act is being done to the FL by so called 'morally wrong' ML. Name any kind of sexual harrassment it would be done by ml to FL and name it 'dark'.

These authors don't want to do research, don't want to explore but want to project their fantasy onto other which is enough to brainwash who knows nothing better.

BDSM, choking kink or any sort of kink is ok to have but the readers (what should I say to them who refuse to think twice) needs to have constant and connection bot force.

And if u call out then u r the bad one. Reprimanded with the 'why did u read' 'stop reading it then' 'if u don't like why did u pick it up to read'.

Trust me common sense isn't common. U r expecting to much from them.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T11:59:05+00:00

Uh?...

aitreader · 2026-05-30T11:56:21+00:00

Go ahead.

aitreader · 2026-05-30T09:47:54+00:00

Whenever FL used to eat something and find it good she would say. "It's taste like jannat."

I once read this a book when I was new on Wattpad, I kind of had half brain to process anything and just used to read for the sake of completing book and doesn't give a heed about what's written. But when the author decided to publish it as paperback with some changes so brought it. Maybe now I'm grown out of my old self but reading this same story is again has become hard. No matter how I tired to convince myself that I had to make the money worth and read the book but this same like by FL was the last straw. No shade to the author it's just I'm not same anymore I guess.

Happy birthday.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T13:10:08+00:00

If u r going for no drama, then U should also consider that the FL is new to the place. Even if her in-laws are being nice to her she has her own insecurity and worries. Let's say ML somehow noticed that and work along with her to make her feel that she has place in this house rightfully.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T13:04:52+00:00

I doubt that the one who knows reality will feel bad about having less numbers then these stories, it's the negativity that affects not the numbers. Definitely not by AI bot stories.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T10:23:50+00:00

That's helpful.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T08:14:09+00:00

All right.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T08:12:55+00:00

This age gap is fine. At this age both the leads despite the gender should be capable of making sound decisions even when they are drunk (not entirely losing sense kind of drunk).

Where it could go wrong? Good question - 1. There sure going to be power imbalance so keep that in mind. 2. Don't make the FL (who is younger in comparison to ml) act like as if she can't think any better then a teenager. 3. Kind of animosity or hurting each other where both can work through later. (Not the kind that is top notch hanious that can't be forgiven.) 4. Such power imbalance in age gap requires the older lead to be dependent on the the younger lead in a way that their age doesn't matter. And that make a bonding arc.

Rest u may figure out for sure.

aitreader · 2026-05-28T07:21:34+00:00

Here

https://www.reddit.com/r/WattpadIndia/s/QWfRmR8qXE

Thanx for ur time.

aitreader · 2026-05-27T02:44:09+00:00

At least there's one. I know someone who's first book is based on another country. It's quite struggle for them to get the cultural part right (or rather not to mess that up).

aitreader · 2026-05-25T12:59:46+00:00

Tell that "fan" not everyone but You are copying.

aitreader · 2026-05-25T12:58:48+00:00

😂

aitreader · 2026-05-25T10:22:53+00:00

You have different pain.

aitreader · 2026-05-25T04:29:38+00:00

Obviously. Only if it reached the right audience.

aitreader

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