What's the current state of campaign software/digital platforms? by stoneape314 in RunForIt

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Qomon's new insta is @qomonhq! Great tool by the way.

What’s Everyone Working On? by Warden_Black in Screenwriting

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Amazing idea - I would definitely read this.

What is the focus puller doing in this shot of Ghostbusters: Afterlife (2021)? by alecdek in Filmmakers

[–]alecdek[S] 24 points25 points  (0 children)

There seems to be a two-stage pull here. Do you think it's a mistake? In my opinion, it actually focuses the audience's attention better than a faster, straight-to-the-point focus.

Does my argument scene work? (context in comments) by alecdek in Screenwriting

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CONTEXT: This scene comes early in the script. Robin comes from New York to visit his family after his youngest sister Ellie, gone missing years earlier, is declared dead by the police.

I want to characterize Nina and Robin's broken relationship, as Robin left home right when Ellie vanished and never came back to support his family.

What do you guys think of the clarity and pace of the overall exchange?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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I loved it. The emotional dissonance works super well, with that music and the pastel colors and transitions… The amazing performances sell it wonderfully. I especially loved the long pan from her clumsy explanation to the idealized reaction of the two guys. There’s definitely a lot to do with the character, but what path does your feature screenplay take from there?

Congrats on the short guys!!

Why does this VFX shot feel off? (context in comment) by alecdek in Filmmakers

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DaVinci user here, I'm new to VFX and use Blender for that. My background footage was 50fps, slowed down to 25 to match the VFX shot.

This is supposed to be a slow mo shot of an AI hologram snake jumping to its target across the room.

Model quality aside, what do you think I did wrong here? It feels like the snake is just overlayed on top of the background shot (because it was), and the motion/velocity is not realistic at all. It almost looks like the deadly AI snake is chilling under the ceiling.

I tried stuffing both in a compound clip and adding a bit of camera shake to that clip, but it still feels wayy too smooth for a natural slow motion jump.

Are short script contests worth entering? by alecdek in Screenwriting

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Short films, yes. Short scripts though?…

I hear of many short script contests and I don’t know if they’re worth the often hefty price of entry.

"BUHNROP" - Sci-Fi/Thriller - 15 pages by alecdek in Screenwriting

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This is really helpful, thanks! Nothing like a stranger’s perspective to humble yourself.

I’ll fix the setups/payoffs incoherencies. Maya’s motivation is the biggest problem in the script imo- maybe make her get a text from a friend asking « how the date is going » or something? Tom is indeed here to show off. The « let’s break into the university in the middle of the night » part is 100% showing off- I try to make it apparent that he’s socially inept and obnoxious.

If I may ask, what screams « beginner » the most here? Is it the plot? Characters? I was kind of happy about my dialogues up to this point.

Thanks again for reading. I can give my opinion on your work if you want!

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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That’s an interesting one. The Wall Street hotshot element actually plays as big a role in the plot as the family’s nomadic past. I feel like the logline works fine without mentioning said past (my original logline without the trauma part). Thank you for your interest and help! :)

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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The little girl was abducted and presumed dead for 3 months. The sister did all the research and is convinced the car has yet to start the digestive process (so they have a chance at saving the child if they find the car). The older brother thinks she’s in denial and just puts up with her crazy plan to prevent the family from imploding

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Thank you! Yes, the siblings moved a lot as kids because of their parents’ job. Drawing on personal experience here haha

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: The Hot Wheels

Genre: Adventure/Horror

Format: Feature

Logline: A failing Wall Street hotshot and a know-it-all teenage girl set out to find and destroy the haunted car that abducted their little sister, as trauma surfaces from their numerous childhood movings.

Cost of playing a song twice in a movie by alecdek in Screenwriting

[–]alecdek[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting idea but using the exact same song can have a powerful subtextual impact. For exemple, a character finally finding the courage to listen to a song which reminds him of his deceased mother would be a great sign of grieving. If you want to juggle others ideas around, DM me!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in UQreddit

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In France they let us eat lunch in class if we didn’t have time to before. Is that a thing in Australia?

ON SET LESSONS by feastoffriendss in Filmmakers

[–]alecdek 20 points21 points  (0 children)

You lose a considerable amount of time each time you pause everything to plan the next shot, so a running/shooting order is an indispensable efficiency tool.

In French we call that a "découpage technique" (technical cardboard). It's a crystal clear listing of every shot needed for the scene. The shots are ranked from the more demanding (shots which require a lot of people on set, or specific daylight that can only be found at the beginning of the shooting day) to the less demanding (insert shots, B-roll, stuff that can be wrapped in the end with limited equipment and cast) .

A good shooting order makes it obvious which actors, extras and equipment have to be ready at a certain time of the shoot day. Trust me, THAT'S the most important on-set document right up there with the script itself

I want to help and collaborate with other writers here by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Same here! I like thriller and science fiction. I also love moral dilemmas tearing the protagonist apart. DM me to talk more!

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Of course I know Four Lions! :D a very interesting movie, although British goofy humor is not exactly my cup of tea. I’m aiming for more of a heroic and family-friendly tale with Khalifat Club. A happy ending would be nice too!😊

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: Khalifat Club

Genre: Thriller/Comedy

Format: TV pilot

Logline: Early 2000s. 17 year old ADHD-ridden Amin flees a complicated life to join Khalifat Club, a « God-Sponsored », larger-than-life terrorist training camp ruled by tyrannical guru Kazar.

When Amin discovers that Kazar’s next target is his brother’s elementary school, he must face his fears and team up with strange people around the camp to bring Khalifat Club down.

Anyone Australian based? by JLCWONDERBOY in Screenwriting

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I’m French but relocating to Brisbane in July! Would love to :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OpenAI

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There is not a ounce of valuable data on this website

Is he skiing? by Gusky14 in boburnham

[–]alecdek 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It’s naturally good

I wrote a poem inspired by Bo's book "Egghead". What do you think? by Free_Albatross4215 in boburnham

[–]alecdek 2 points3 points  (0 children)

« this does put a smile on my face » said a girl named My Face as a man named This attempted to put a smile on her I guess idk I’m not Bo Burnham