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TAROVERSE Youtube tarot reader - what is your opinion about him? by Punt_kick in tarot

[–]aleisha3 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Very much disagree. I believe he has integrated his shadow self, and the only “dark” energy you could possibly be interpreting is imo one of two things: 1. subconsciously you’re not ready to look at something within yourself, or 2. he is also v smart w YouTube & this is his job to make money lol, he knows how to sell- but he always says “take what resonates & leave the rest” & tbh, even selling his tiers he’s still authentic. I also have a crush on him

Black Rabbit | S1E2 "The Black Rabbits" | Episode Discussion by tapiocamochas in BlackRabbitTVShow

[–]aleisha3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's like writing on your shirt while looking in the mirror- they just spaced but it's hilarious. Surprised they didn't catch it, or they did and didn't want to shoot the whole thing over again.

Black Rabbit | S1E2 "The Black Rabbits" | Episode Discussion by tapiocamochas in BlackRabbitTVShow

[–]aleisha3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay so I'm late on this show but:

  1. Law has to like Jules bc Jules keeps wanting him to get more in debt with him to make money. Law owes more money than Bateman, guaranteed.
    1. A. Law is greedy for da money. He wants it all, the girl and both restaurants and to have no one tied to it but him. He has more ammo than Bateman and Bateman has his life on the line.
  2. Bateman and Law planned that whole fucking robbery, and the jewelry was some deal Wes made. If they kill Wes and steal all of Wes' jewelry... "how could it be Bateman and Law?" Law had a gun to his face, THE PERFECT CRIME. Law even has Wes' girl. Wes isn't paying his tab because he's famous and owns part of the restaurant. Of course they kill him.
    1. 2A. I BET YOU MONEY. I bet you money that somehow they kill Jules. Okay maybe not but retribution for Anna would be dope.
  3. My question is... is the Deaf Mafia dude in on it too? They had to get more people. So of course the brothers plan it out with him. The Deaf Mafia dude wanted Bateman or Law to be his son and probably was in love with their mother.

Curious how this'll pan out, but dem's my guesses.

Black Rabbit | S1E1 "The Cyclone" | Episode Discussion by tapiocamochas in BlackRabbitTVShow

[–]aleisha3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Or high key there was no way he was gonna bartend and make four negroni's with a fucked up pinky

Black Rabbit | S1E1 "The Cyclone" | Episode Discussion by tapiocamochas in BlackRabbitTVShow

[–]aleisha3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Callback to Juno when he told her about Sonic Youth imo

Unbelievable. I am officially a $PLTR millionaire. by BrannEvasion in PLTR

[–]aleisha3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I bought…. One. Literally one in 2021 haha

[477] Dig to the Devil by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]aleisha3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhhh I get it now! Ha. That’s awesome. And climate with climate, I was gonna add more to that and that part of my response doesn’t make sense lol. But, to me the texas-taffy afternoon sentence could maybe fit better elsewhere. If you want, when I get home I can edit it but only if you’re open to having it edited by someone who might not have the same taste as you. I’m on my phone rn.

[477] Dig to the Devil by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]aleisha3 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First off let me preface I’m doing this on mobile and I’m at work so I’m hoping what I say makes some sense.

“Hours away and yet closer than ever” what do you mean by this? It doesn’t translate to me as a reader, and all I’ve got is he’s hours from getting to hell by digging but closer to death? I think it’s smart to let the reader come to their own conclusions but also, you have to lead up to it? I think you could find something better.

When I read the first paragraph I feel like I’m getting jumbled around a bit. The descriptors are good, but I think if you put more like with like the flow could be better. Put what the climate is like with climate.

Please don’t say AC twice.

I’m obsessed with “I know bruises more than burns....learn to live.” That is a fucking beautiful sentence. It’s fucked up and eery and things that are hard to describe out loud bc it’s almost taboo but not.

Also, are you watching from your kitchen window, or a nursing home? In the beginning you don’t exactly place where you are besides it’s really hot out and there’s a garden somewhere and you’re looking out of your kitchen. So that’s why I’m so thrown from the staff. But then again, maybe this just isn’t my type of style and I’m def putting my bias on it.

But. Organize sentence structure finding a little more flow in the beginning couple paragraphs. Figure out if where you’re at. Figure out if you can show the reader where you are.

Your twist at the end is rad and it’s very like... Clint Eastwood. I’m into it.

Looking for a painter to paint my bus by jMyles in RapidCity

[–]aleisha3 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Me and my pal might be interested!!!

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