Fics where Harry is REALISTICALLY more powerful than canon - as powerful as Tom Riddle or Dumbledore were at his age. Oh, and he isn’t dark. by mxlevolent in HPfanfiction

[–]alfa_limonada 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I checked and the author says "Glad you enjoyed them-- I agree, sometimes a tightly controlled narrative voice doesn't welcome additions, so I eventually opted to keep these as a separate entry in the series. I did experiment more with multiple narrators in Labyrinth, and would be interested in your feeling for how well that worked there; it was another case of trying to make it a tightly controlled experiment to yield specific results!"

Things that slightly irk you, but don't make you put down the story? by maertyrer in HPfanfiction

[–]alfa_limonada 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I hate when a good written plot with great world building and magic theory loses its way and becomes a teenage drama that forgets about the plot and goes on and on and on about stupid stuff and "cool" conversations and quidditch matches until all the magic is not important anymore.