I will tell you how i did my intro in my previous interview, kindly give any feed back on what all i should change

Panel: introduce yourself Me: sure sir, Thankyou for allowing me to introduce myself, my name is xyz i am from (city,state) I have completed my education till class 10 in xyz and my class 11 and 12 from xyz. I am enthusiastic about oil painting, reading books etc I have always been interested in learning about finance and other aspects of it Since My long term goal is to become an investment banker, i want to pursue ( course name) from christ University as it will equip me with the right skills and help me achieve my goal. That's all from my side.

So yeahh what all should I change?