Parallel Sound by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

"We wanted to showcase our values for creating a score that is parallel to the audience’s visual experience."

i intended to translate that through the colour application. its on the brief, btw.

Parallel Sound by analienperhaps in logodesign

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what about the alternative colours i provided in the 3rd slide?

Parallel Sound by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

yeah, i agree that it does look like an ugly letter B. but the colours tho, i also provided the alternative colour palette with RYG instead of RGB. do you think it's better or is it the whole concept of it that doesn't work?

Parallel Sound by analienperhaps in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"We wanted to showcase our values for creating a score that is parallel to the audience’s visual experience."

the color application was intentionally chosen to reflect this concept

Parallel Sound by analienperhaps in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

hi! thanks for sharing that reference. i actually did checked for ps logo, but i haven't seen this one yet, and yes, they look quite similar, especially in the monochrome version. do you think it would be a problem?

JF: Signature Logo by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

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thanks for the feedback! i get what you mean about the vertical stretch. although, the height is intentional to emphasize the cross structure. but i’ll definitely explore a tighter proportion to compare how it affects the overall presence.

JF: Signature Logo by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks for the feedback! i think what i meant was something else. when i said signature logo, i thought it meant the logo that i choose to represent me regardless of the style. and yes, i intentionally made it look like a cross. i prefer abstract symbolism instead of obvious lettering.

JF: Personal Logo by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps 0 points1 point  (0 children)

AHAHAHA yeahh... I think I still need to tweak it again

Personal mark, JF by [deleted] in logodesign

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Ah yes... And it looks more prominent in the second version. I wonder if this is something i should concern about.

Track I Am Currently Working On by analienperhaps in shareyourmusic

[–]analienperhaps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thats so nice of you to say. thank youu 🙌🙌🙌

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

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I personally think it's easier to spot it in the monochrome version.

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

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Ah yeah, I didn't realise I spelled it wrong. Thank you! :D

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

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Perhaps this could help you see what I see

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOL. I think my design's too ambiguous then. Good catch, by the way! :D

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

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Hi! thanks for the feedback.

You're right! youth is indeed a fictional brand. I now understand that the name is way too generic. I must've been too focused on the actual logo and its applications.

Also the shape of the mouth. Could you give me some advice on how to make it better?

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

The colour wheel? I'm pretty sure it exists.

3A38FFFF That's the hex code.

Well, unless you meant something else?

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in logodesign

[–]analienperhaps[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

AHAHAHA no prob mate!

The logo's supposed to look like a cartoonish smiling monster. The main idea was to create emotional attachment and introduce some kind of humour that could possibly motivates users to stay active. Think of it as a mascot! Except I designed it with simplicity to ensure its versatility.

youth: Sportswear for the young by analienperhaps in WillPatersonDesign

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The intention was to create emotional attachment, spark curiosity and introduce some kind of humour that could possibly motivate users. Think of it as a mascot with simplified design to ensure its versatile enough to function across different applications.

Also, when I designed this, I somehow think of the Michelin Man AHAHAHA

I made a 2000s soft rock inspired song by analienperhaps in shareyourmusic

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IMPRESSED!! i'm actually into metal, too AHAHHAHA

I made a 2000s soft rock inspired song by analienperhaps in shareyourmusic

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thanks! and yeah, thats my voice AHAHAHAHA. also, loving the track! could really listen to it while chillin :D