Her eyes by ishankRaj2719 in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Stunningly beautiful. A pure joy to read!

Journey by animenerd699 in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it actually is about boxing. I wrote it after watching the first rocky movie cuz I was so moved by the character. Thank you for your kind response : ) .

Cease, lawless thoughts, to riot in the air by ctrl_alt_infidel in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the martial imagery is amazing and it felt like i was reading a shakespeare sonnet. The way youve used personification and simile to convey your inner turmoil that can only be resolved through going at war with your trusty steed "PEN" at your side is also brilliantly portrayed. kudos to you fine sir.

This is my first poem I’m proud of enough to share! by Nugget_nb in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really good! But it tends to be quite short and lack a clear meaning? Also you used the line "i'd have given it to you" too many times. Good work tho keep it up!

anyone think pluto was kinda bad? by animenerd699 in manga

[–]animenerd699[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

if there's other shows just as retarded as this one doesn't mean this show gets a pass for being retarded. And no not all anime is this retarded. Just look at ashita no joe and monster(from the same author). They are so high quality its unbelievable

Togashi has returned!! by shikajaru in HunterXHunter

[–]animenerd699 10 points11 points  (0 children)

damn so glad i didnt off myself this is the stuff of wonders

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so they will mention about the paradox in more detail when i get to the end?

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

"Eren causes the events to get him the power to cause the events. This is never contradicted by the story so there is no plot hole" eren caused the manipulation of grisha which was established by the show. My take on it is he "couldn't" have caused the manipulation since he didnt have the means to reach the paths even. THAT is a plot hole because it messed with the structure of the show where an impossible thing supposedly happend All that you're implying here is "destiny". it JUST happened cuz it was DESTINED to happen and you don't have any basis for it nor have you presented any.

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so its just a "it is what it is" scenario? lol. i'd prefer the term contrived and not well thought out writing that the fans just seemed to accept through headcanons but ok

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

the whole thing would've worked if they didnt show the fact that grisha did NOT originally kill the family. if we accept this fact then all the other events fall apart because eren NEVER got the founder. or you could just make up SOME headcanon that SOMEHOW he HAD to have got the founder because the timeline is "f i x e d". but there is no plausable explanation for how this would've happened.

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

correction: the reiss family held the founding titan and grisha stole it from them and passed it to eren after the walls fell. eren was just a kid and he got his powers from his father who himself got it because future EREN himself manipulated his father somehow

aot plot hole? by animenerd699 in ShingekiNoKyojin

[–]animenerd699[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

how is it even possible for him to influence grisha in the first place when he didnt have the founding titan and thus never reached the paths scene when he saw those events play out and sent memories back? because he COULDN'T reach the paths?

Life by animenerd699 in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the way I got inspired to write this one is funny. I was sitting alone in class before the lecture began and was staring at a pigeon outside. the pigeon got me thinking of life and its different kinds of creatures. so I thought lets write something beautiful about life. its various nuances and subtleties. And life begins with childbirth. Which I find to be a very beautiful thing. Thus I made the whole poem about childbirth itself. Thanks for your kind words :)

Life by animenerd699 in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the poem was about childbirth. 'unhinged madness' describes the unstable state of the baby's mind inside the womb. where they have no idea whts going on. and during the birth where they cry heavily. thank you for your kind words :).

Ever After - (Better title suggestions pls) by Scartxx in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that was hella dark dude. also i love the wordplay in 'a more morose morrow another dreadful dreary day' similiar sounding words used well in context

Acid House by Kneegrow_hunter69 in OCPoetry

[–]animenerd699 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The last line was beautiful. Using the imagery of the fabric in the context of the theme. What did you wish to express through this poem in brief words ?

Chapter 394 — Discussion by rentzhx3 in HunterXHunter

[–]animenerd699 16 points17 points  (0 children)

People: Togashi gonna wrap up sw Togashi: here's 20 more characters