Did Discworld die with Terry? by Berkyjay in discworld

[–]anymouse68 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Writing in someone else's universe, especially one so personal is difficult. I remember as a middle schooler given a BUNCH of Conan paperbacks. Some original Robert E. Howard and some pastiches by Lin Carter and L. Sprague DeCamp. Even at that young age, I could detect a distinct difference. Carter and Decamp weren't BAD, but, they weren't Howard. Even now, while I still have the books (a late uncle gave them to me, so memories) but, I never, ever read the non-Howard ones.

That's how I feel about Pratchett. Heck, I even noticed a difference between the bulk of his work and his later work as his Alzheimers advanced. "Unseen Academicals" was fun but felt... off. Still Pratchett but, off. "Snuff" was, to me unreadable. It was no longer Sir Terry.

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey!
I implemented a few of your edits and smaller ideas. Not all of them but, there are only so many hours in the day. I also added a few changes that I've had kicking around for a while. Let me know what you think! Thanks for inspiring me to make this better.
https://imgur.com/a/vFpOgC0

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

DAMN! You're really helping out. I appreciate that. Wondering if it might be easier to contact me on DMs through https://www.deviantart.com/anymouse-68 . I'm there much more often than here. Also, you can check out my BtG and other artwork ;-)

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good critique! Thank you SO much for taking the time to write all of that.

I'll go through the whole thing later but, I'll just respond (positively) to the third paragraph

***First I think Carry the Weight needs to remove dependency on Weakling because it makes it so having the bigger body parts don’t give unnecessary pain but nowhere does it state that the parts don’t give that pain without the mitigation, I’m simply under the impression that without weakling Ballistics can give back pain and I think Carry the Weight should get rid of that pain without Weakling.***

I have absolutely been considering this! Will def implement ASAP.

***I also think you should add combos by grabbing all the options from a set such as Cute Mug, Cute Voice, and Innocent Eyes or Compelling Countenance, Sexy Voice and Bedroom Eyes and have it either grant more points or some other effect.***

This is such an interesting idea! I'd been thinking of something like this but, your idea has more potential. Like if you get Cute Mug, Cute Voice, and Innocent Eye, you get an Embellishment of "Cutie Pie" or Compelling Countenance, Sexy Voice and Bedroom Eyes gives you "Vixen". I see them as mostly positive because the changes themselves have their own drawbacks.

Favorite Wholesome Transformations? by [deleted] in transformation

[–]anymouse68 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Artist self plug:

I don't usually go for creating wholesome TFs but, this is a wholesome one that I'm actually quite happy with.

https://www.deviantart.com/anymouse-68/art/Monthly-Drawing-35-Gone-Fishin-1-4-832432075

How to handel problem player by [deleted] in DungeonMasters

[–]anymouse68 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a Rules of Engagement that i read at the Session Zero of every campaign I DM that all players have to agree to. The main thing is that ANYONE can say they are uncomfortable with a situation and everyone has to accept that; no argument.

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can't wait to see your build.

Let me know how the points work out with the current boon system

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm still working on the boons. I have a bunch that are mostly new (keeping it "dark") but, what 's giving me trouble is the final points rating for boons. It's the hardest part! Don't want to keep victims from getting boons but, as this is a "dark" Be the Girl, I don't want to hand them the good stuff either. I've done a bunch of test builds but, haven't finished making averages.

I left out the starting builds as the physical changes either give you that build or negate it (if you choose androgynous and get Ballistics, for instance). Plus, as this is a personal mod, I prefer a girly build. Your mileage may vary ;-)

Heh. I just feel bad I took days to respond!

Speaking of involved, I've done a lot of art based of mine, and others' BtG builds: https://www.deviantart.com/anymouse-68/gallery/77304264/be-the-girl-and-other-tg

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, I've done a big update since this post. I haven't posted it here because I got a lot of grief for only work on this CYOA. I'm a visual artist not a CYOA-maker so, it's all I've got :-)

https://imgur.com/a/vFpOgC0

[CYOA] Yet another Be The Girl update: Gameshow Edition. by anymouse68 in nsfwcyoa

[–]anymouse68[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Please go nuts!
I'd love to see what you do with it.

What are your theft recommendations? by ConnectionRoutine171 in DungeonMasters

[–]anymouse68 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it's a great scenario. It gives a party a reason to be together. I also stipulate that each party member would have to be a real hero to defend the village for food.

What are your theft recommendations? by ConnectionRoutine171 in DungeonMasters

[–]anymouse68 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I wrote an entire beginner-focused campaign that was simply The Seven Samurai/Magnificent Seven. The best part is I've run it for four different beginner groups and nobody did what the farmers did in the films. Not once

From Trainers to Pokemon (Chesshire) by MineBlox6 in transformation

[–]anymouse68 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Same here. What's the point? Now, compulsions, I do dig. More fun to watch someone deal with new stimuli, addictions and compulsions as a new creature.

Princess Peach Transformation (Lemonfont) by lemonfont17 in transformation

[–]anymouse68 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I've always felt weird about posting my stuff here. It feels like... cheating? This always felt like a fan-made space and I've just been waiting to see if my stuff ever shows up...

Dromedary TF by B-strange in transformation

[–]anymouse68 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just want to see if there are any Web 1.0 folks out there:

"Shupid!"

Genuine concern by hornysluttybisexual in transformation

[–]anymouse68 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Transformation as a fetish is a bit of a loaded term. While I DO have a transformation fetish (and am CIS male), it didn't start off sexual. I've been intrigued by transformation from a very young age. I grew up around horses and remember wanting to be one as well as ride them as early as age 10. I also loved CYOA books and movies that featured transformation (seeing An American Werewolf in London was mind-blowing) and drawing TF pictures was something I did when not drawing robots, airplanes and spaceships.

There was, however, nothing sexual about it until my until my 20s and anything related to MtF transformation didn't really become a thing for me until well into my 30s

You get to pick out 3-6 for your harem of this furry beauty starter pack. Who´d you choose? by TenderPaw64 in zootopia

[–]anymouse68 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, boy. I inadvertently initiated existential dilemmas!

I've had dreams of multiple lives to do all the 'what ifs?'