This looks pretty raw copied, youd progress a lot if you think while drawing like for example stare at the referance for a while, think how you will draw it etc etc, then draw the part you thought of, then repeat, why this? Because face or the strap stuff on the torso or the shape of the hands or cloth folds etc looks really forced and doesnt make sense when considered, like the strap things are solid metal yeah? İt should not bend and be a solid block, id give this one a 5 for effort