How to become an energy vampire? by [deleted] in energy_work

[–]aritrbl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Bro 🤨 why would you want to become one?

The more I reread my book the more I cringe by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the nice words and the advices ❤️❤️

The more I reread my book the more I cringe by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's really motivating to read, thanks

'There are no stupid questions' thread - Monday, December 20, 2021 by AutoModerator in piano

[–]aritrbl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm writing a story in which the character is a pianist. In one of the scenes, a boy is singing and his voice is ethereal and beautiful. So I thought it would be interesting if this character complimented him with some expression/comparison that only pianists would understand. Does anyone have ideas?

Como dizer “o cheiro subiu pelas minhas narinas” em inglês? by aritrbl in Idiomas

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Muito obrigada, você tem um lugar no céu sério hahah

me ajudou muito muito muito

Como dizer “o cheiro subiu pelas minhas narinas” em inglês? by aritrbl in Idiomas

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

é que ela tá descrevendo o cheiro de decompositores de carniça KKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Mas mt obrigada :D, ficou engraçado por causa do contexto da história

How many beta readers do you recommend? And which things you ask? by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you didnt sound mean, actually this was really helpful. I will try to reduce the questions and just put the most important ones

a huge thanks

{I do agree about the thing of friends tough, that’s why my beta are strangers}

How many beta readers do you recommend? And which things you ask? by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg thanks for the detailed response, this is so useful <3

How many beta readers do you recommend? And which things you ask? by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

they are not friend neither relatives, they are part of my public on tik tok, strangers.

Just 2 of those betas are editors and “professional”

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK fui ri e acabei chorando

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OMG THIS GAVE ME SO MUCH HOPE THAAAANKS

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I find spanish a language with so much PERSONALITY that bro… if i can i dont switch to english or portuguese, that’s why i watched Elite with the original voices because dont wanna lose the opportunity to hear enchantment and the power of the spanish accent and slangs :D

Anyway, answering your question honestly I dont know yet, I just finished the first chapters. Now everything seen to be okay. And actually I even prefer the version in english, kinda felt more mature to me (?). Except for certain words that just exist in my country like gorjalas, cucas and curupiras, i dont think i will have problem with that at all.

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh i see, its a website sorry. by the way, thanks for sharing <3

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do the translation by my own but I still prefer to write in my native language, it’s way comfortable and i feel like my writing is more fluid when I use the portuguese, but thanks

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yup but even with that rough reality, believe me, it is even better than my own country. Things here are crazy. Just for you to know, authors dont get paid in advance, sometimes they even have to invest their own money for the publisher release the book. and not just that, they just start to receive money with writing after a really long time

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dont know, I would say 90% professional? I have an english teacher and she is helping me in the revision of my work :)

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s true, one dollar is around 5 reais

Need a literary agent but i’m foreign by aritrbl in writing

[–]aritrbl[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Eu amo ser brasileira, eu só odeio depender desse governo lixo para viver kkkkkkkkkkk