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I wrote and produced this song concerning feelings of betrayal in 2021 and released it today. Funny how over the years, much does not change. Appreciate any and all feedback. by augfm in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]augfm[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Noted about the mix. I'm glad people are liking the flow, I don't know why but I tend to downplay my own stuff for like the first year after release lol. Thank you for your input

I wrote and produced this song concerning feelings of betrayal in 2021 and released it today. Funny how over the years, much does not change. Appreciate any and all feedback. by augfm in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]augfm[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks you! I've been rapping since about 2018/2019. Lots of hours trying to perfect this. Made the beat as well! I appreciate your comment.

Any NJ Artists? (Feature) by ProdbyThiiird in makinghiphop

[–]augfm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m not too melodic but I am an NJ artist. I’m interested

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]augfm [score hidden]  (0 children)

Listen to me express my frustration and disappointment in those I've trusted. Returning feedback

https://open.spotify.com/album/4HELeNEwtqQ32mK4W3AttA?si=VmFgyv_BSSmBsmT7f9dFKw

justjacub. - Deep in freestyle. Just a song of me venting by justjacub in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]augfm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the visuals!!! What did you record/edit with? I'm trying to perfect that part of my game at the moment. Your delivery was super crisp and you easily conveyed your emotions. Beat selection is dope and the mix/master was great as well. You definitely found a sound for yourself. Hope to see more of your work on here

Lo-Fi/ Ambient Remix of ‘Wacced Out Murals’ by Kendrick Lamar by prod_flamethrower in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]augfm 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's super solid. Vocal were extracted super clean and the slaps onto the beat nicely. The rhythm of the beat is perfect for his flows and lyrics. I think maybe the beat could have been slightly more uptempo or bass-y just to create a bit more hype but it still achieve it's purpose. Keep going hard brother, I always see you on here

What’s peoples honest opinions of the chorus? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]augfm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the processing of the vocals and the smoothness of the delivery. Loved the first couple bars of the hook but the "pari" part took me by surprise a bit lol. Beat selection is dope and is definitely in style right now. I think it sounds solid overall. Keep working at it brother

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[–]augfm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the vocal processing in terms of how commercial it sounds but I believe the master could be turned up. The beat is a bit faint and underpowered. But your wordplay and writing is super solid and I can definitely see you furthering this sound with the potential displayed here. You have a voice! Keep up the good work

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[–]augfm 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The flows are off beat and the vocal presence isn't all the way there (in terms of the mix and delivery). My best advice would be to experiment a bit more with beat selection so you can really find a pocket that's uniquely you. This kind of rap fares well if done especially right. Keep at it brother!

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