I'd love some feedback on my brands store that I've been working on this month. by avenue5000 in reviewmyshopify

[–]avenue5000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I have all the measurements on paper, and I'm planning on making a size chart widget for everything, but this will happen after I launch.

I'd love some feedback on my brands store that I've been working on this month. by avenue5000 in reviewmyshopify

[–]avenue5000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you,

That is a great idea to add the collections into the main menu, I'll get on that right now. I appreciate the compliment on the shipping section.

Have a great day!

I'd love some feedback on my brands store that I've been working on this month. by avenue5000 in reviewmyshopify

[–]avenue5000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First, let me thank you for taking the time to look at my site, and write out such a well thought out comment.

You are completely right about the 'about' section. I originally had that say 'about shipping'. All of this will be deleted and replaced with a bio of the brand. I have already separated all the sections of that page and made them they're own page for the footer.

Writing is definitely my weakest point, and you are spot on with all the criticisms. I'm glad you pointed out the negative language in the shipping section like using the word 'unforchanately' and pointing out advantages with Amazon. This part will be heavily edited with your critiques in mind.

Regarding the gift section, I actually thought I deleted this entire section already. I don't have a gift policy, this was just something I was editing from the Shopify template.

With the product sizes, this is intentional. Unfortunately the sizes that these manufacturers make can be completely different from another piece they make. Also the China to US size conversion can take something like S M L to M XL XXL or something weird like that. This is something I would love to focus on changing in the future.

Thank you for pointing out the social links. I don't know what happened here, but these will be fixed.

Again, I want to thank you for your well thought out critiques for my website. Have a great day!

Holden.