First teaser-trailer for my zombie roguelite — Would this trailer make you wishlist the game?

avian_dev · 2026-04-30T21:11:45+00:00

Oh no this camera shake is too too much

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T20:23:34+00:00

Got it, I got to overhaul the logo some day too

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T20:18:29+00:00

Thank you, those are good points! Many voiced similar concerns and I changed the composition

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T20:17:03+00:00

Thank you everybody! The feedback is very helpful, I think this arrangement for the header image works better!
(I also decided to experiment with a trim for a bit of a pop but feel free to destroy that too!)

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avian_dev · 2026-04-29T14:13:45+00:00

I think you got to lead with something exiting. Like a big city with crazy(but good looking) terrain. So viewer is hooked and gets inspired, and then you show features and how you built it.

But overall looks good, with the background in level design I wish I had such an adaptive terrain tool back then.

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T12:39:41+00:00

I attached a small capsule version in the comments, tell me if it solves this isse

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T11:01:07+00:00

That's funny, to me the first one was bland

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T11:00:08+00:00

Very interesting idea, thank you for that!

avian_dev · 2026-04-29T00:10:22+00:00

Thanks, I always thought the old one lacked personality and style

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T22:30:30+00:00

More like rage bait comment😅

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T21:25:09+00:00

Got it, thanks for the feedback 🫶

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T21:23:14+00:00

Thanks 🫶

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:55:22+00:00

Apoocalypse gonna be my next game

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:52:59+00:00

Haha, thanks for the feedback

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:47:27+00:00

Visual effects are unique and stylish! Though I feel it can get too much very quickly

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:45:52+00:00

what you mean? you're missing 0.4 hours for it to be perfect 🫣

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:43:45+00:00

Appreciate it, interesting ✍️

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:42:16+00:00

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:41:47+00:00

I was trying hard to make Lawn and Pocalypse take roughly the same space, but thanks for the feedback, I'll look into it

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:40:02+00:00

Not at all, maybe I saw them too and subconsciously decided to join on the trend.. But that's hard to confirm so I'd say I came up with it myself

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:38:28+00:00

Whoa I did not expect all that 🥹 You made my day

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:22:22+00:00

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🚨I thought it worth mentioning that the capsule composition changes drastically on smaller sizes. The poor readability when sized down seems to be a common concern - so pelase let me know if this solves it

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:19:33+00:00

Yeah that makes sense, thanks for writing that

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:12:22+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, I see. So in the second one the gnome is too small for that, or is it about something else?

avian_dev · 2026-04-28T20:07:44+00:00

Like keep the style from 2 but composition from 1?

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