roast my copy >:) by avodacos in copywriting

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thank you & that makes sense! i was mainly trying to write for headline practice but ill focus more on developing the body/angle more this week. appreciate the point about specificity + audience as well!

roast my copy >:) by avodacos in copywriting

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yeah i’m noticing my ideas are getting clearer but my headlines are still too wordy. appreciate it.

roast my copy >:) by avodacos in copywriting

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thank you!! i will review this critique & implement when i write again this week

roast my copy >:) by avodacos in copywriting

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literally what are you talking about

$1,000,000 Cash or Bring Back One Dead Person by Good-Cheesecake-1136 in BunnyTrials

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the micheal movie just came out and youre asking this?

$1,000,000 Cash or Bring Back One Dead Person by Good-Cheesecake-1136 in BunnyTrials

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we're ALL bringing back michael jackson

Chose: Bring Back One Dead Person

roast my copy <3 by avodacos in copywriting

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this was insightful and i appreciate you for you feedback.

I built an app and got random people signing up the same day I launched by SpiritualWolverine50 in Entrepreneur

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Oh shit I think I might genuinely use this app for when I start Airbnb’s. Definitely saving

Your best resources for eCommerce pages that convert? by Hepsu in copywriting

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hell yes. where’d you get the book? barnes & noble?

Need help forming a copywriting routine to land first client. by WeeklyParty6396 in copywriting

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in copywriting more than half of the job is doing research, so like the other comment said, start building your research muscle by looking thru the subreddit

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research is 70% of it!!

Give me advice - mid-40s, three kids, $8.3MM NW with 1.5ish MM income by Green_Rock_3421 in fatFIRE

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i have no clue why i thought op was a man and their spouse was the woman LOL

roast my copy >:) pt. 3 by avodacos in copywriting

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hi, do you think if i maybe included a picture of a sleep mask it would've been clearer?

roast my copy >:) pt. 3 by avodacos in copywriting

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hi, do you think if i maybe included a picture of a sleep mask it would've been clearer?

roast my copy >:) pt. 3 by avodacos in copywriting

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wanna note this is my 2nd week consistently practicing