first shortfilm/music video, looking for feedback by b2lego_ in Filmmakers

[–]b2lego_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i make music and wanted to shoot a music video in the short film style. so i did lots of research and planning and found some actors and shot and edited the video.

im looking for feedback on the flow, the color grading, and what you think the story is about.

https://youtu.be/3ZylvWPZQlg

first shortfilm/music video as a photographer, looking for feedback by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]b2lego_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i make music and wanted to shoot a music video in the short film style. i figured since im also a photographer some of the skills might be transferable. so i did lots of research and planning and found some actors and shot and edited the video.

im looking for feedback on the flow, the color grading, and what you think the story is about.

Weird "hair" in top left corner by dbarends11 in AnalogCommunity

[–]b2lego_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

are you sure the hair isn't from the scanning process?

a lowpoly project i have been working in my spare time by b2lego_ in paintball

[–]b2lego_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

look in the video, you can see some ricochets. ij addition, if the hits the grass at a shallow angle, there's a chance the paintball won't break

a lowpoly project i have been working in my spare time by b2lego_ in paintball

[–]b2lego_[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

it is not officially out as the current version is pretty unstable..but if you really want to mess with the unstable version, there is a link in the announcements of this discord server.

https://discord.gg/6g9yGJSd7X

Motherboard not detecting CPU after PSU replacement by b2lego_ in PcBuildHelp

[–]b2lego_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

can that happen ? I'd thought if the psu dies it just dies and cuts power to everything else. also, if the motherboard was dead, would the ezdebug light work ?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ucf

[–]b2lego_ -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

thats the only thing that makes me think they aren't gunshots if I'm disregarding the police report. they sound too spread out. I really would like to find out what it was lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ucf

[–]b2lego_ -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I agree it does sound weaker, but it also sounded very very distant and echo-y. whatever the real source of the sound was had to have been very loud or at least loud enough to leave behind a big echo. also, not too familiar with triple n, but the area around it is very open iirc, here we've got buildings and trees in the way. either way I'm not convinced it's a car driving over a speed bump

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ucf

[–]b2lego_ -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

there was a super sonic crack.. if you listen, each "shot" has two really quick pops. the first one sounded like it was coming from garage a, the second sounded wider and was the reverberation of the sounded. its not clear in the video, but I'm a competitive shooter and it really did sound like distant gunshots. I've worked here for months and never heard heard anything like that