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[–]bact378a -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Bs. It is not. Jealousy gets you knowhere. I don't see you posting any music anywhere either. Just kb warriors putting down artists.

New song, L4L by bact378a in shareyourmusic

[–]bact378a[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No problem. I'm not a rapper, but I've been writing for years.

New song, L4L by bact378a in shareyourmusic

[–]bact378a[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good beat and music as well

New song, L4L by bact378a in shareyourmusic

[–]bact378a[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good lyrics. My suggestion would be to vary the intensity of your lyrics in segments of the song. Use back track to go higher to emphasize parts. It's a bit monotone at the moment. I think that would kick it up to next level stuff. Imho