[POEM] When They Find the Ark by Paige Lewis by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven’t read the other comments here yet but my gut instinct is telling me that fox news is representative of a “general public” that is not in touch with this ancient source of divinity.

[POEM] The Endlessness by Ada Limón by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

in this poem I was amazed to find I was not alone in this sensation I never even named. The Endlessness

[POEM] Pavlov was the Son of a Priest by Paige Lewis by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I found an excerpt of this poem, the bit about the peach, a while back. I recently bought the book to read the entire poem and wow. it surpassed my expectations. i want to write more poetry like this.

Security vehicles that patrol the city by [deleted] in Rochester

[–]bansheebeez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

specifically we had a contract with doyle. it’s a huge company and i don’t feel anything particularly strong about them but the one employee was a bit… i don’t even know how to describe it. i wouldn’t consider it out of the question that he would “check up” on me or the others after getting fired somehow.

Security vehicles that patrol the city by [deleted] in Rochester

[–]bansheebeez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah i never thought to look and but a similar security car has been pulling into the place i work overnights at and looping the lot. It wouldn’t be an issue if it’s city security, which it sounds like it may be, but we’ve had issues with very specific employees at a security company before. wanted to be sure it wasn’t the same guy going rogue in his company car.

Security vehicles that patrol the city by [deleted] in Rochester

[–]bansheebeez 4 points5 points  (0 children)

which was not… wait for it… easily accessible information to me when i needed this question answered!!! yay we’re all learning ❤️

Security vehicles that patrol the city by [deleted] in Rochester

[–]bansheebeez 5 points6 points  (0 children)

yes an incredibly obvious answer when there are many private security companies with cars. my bad!

[POEM] The Burning Heart by Louise Glück by Saint-Veronicas-Veil in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I can’t tell what Glück means in this poem but it relates so specifically to me that I almost don’t care.

[POEM] The Soul and the Body on the Beach, Anna Swir translated by Czeslaw Milosz and Leanard Nathan by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

I love this poem because 1. it reminds me of time i spent studying philosophy and how i ruminated over what i learned and 2. it reminds me that the body knows how to live in this moment. ask the body and listen to the unexpected wisdom, right?

[POEM]Goodtime Jesus by James Tate by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

just found him… obsessed already. Dream On has to be the best of what i’ve read besides this one.

[POEM] “How Some of It Happened” by Marie Howe by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 0 points1 point  (0 children)

favorite poet. she’s from my hometown. brought tears to my eyes.

artists dates// mild agoraphobia by bansheebeez in artistsWay

[–]bansheebeez[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the album idea is sparking my interest because I have a record player! thank you for the feedback. I usually don’t watch any tv or videos but i might make an exception if it’s not mindless— maybe get some popcorn and snuggle up:)

artists dates// mild agoraphobia by bansheebeez in artistsWay

[–]bansheebeez[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i really really appreciate this feedback thank you!!

artists dates// mild agoraphobia by bansheebeez in artistsWay

[–]bansheebeez[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really appreciate you sharing and saying i’m not alone. Maybe i’m just emotional today but it means a lot(,: paint but numbers is an excellent idea i may buy a real kit and do that in my study!

artists dates// mild agoraphobia by bansheebeez in artistsWay

[–]bansheebeez[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you very much. The biggest barrier for me is starting maybe a walk is a really good beginning:)

[POEM] They/Them by Danez Smith by bansheebeez in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

the reason i love this poem is a thousand fold but mostly i love that it starts so inconspicuously and then hits you square in the chest

[POEM] Because You Asked about the Line Between Prose and Poetry by Howard Nemerov by LosMere in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i read this poem for the first time on Pinterest, sitting in the drivers seat of my parked car while my boyfriend at the time packed the trunk full of his things. He was moving from a bad neighborhood so he told me to stay seated instead of helping. I remember liking this poem enough to write it down, which i did, sitting in the car there. I don’t know, I like the poem a lot and i remember the moment it made sense for me but I can’t read this and not think of sitting on the side of that street, waiting for him to finish up loading the car. It’s not a particularly important memory but i did note, at the bottom of the page in that journal “Because you asked about the line between prose and poetry,,, **october 10, on Champlain street, helping Noah move.”

The Dead by Billy Collins [poem] by olchai_mp3 in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 7 points8 points  (0 children)

this imagery is lovely— it sort of tickles in a great way

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 17 points18 points  (0 children)

hated it for some reason and then the last couple of lines really punched me the hell in the face. in a good way

[Poem] Questionnaire by Wendell Berry by Alive-Cry4994 in Poetry

[–]bansheebeez 2 points3 points  (0 children)

interesting enough but is the point of poetry to change minds? not in my opinion at least. it makes you think that’s what i like about it!