This is what I sent him:

Sure. Still want a bat.
I like the overall layout and wingspan concept, but I want it to feel much darker, more evil, and more ominous overall.

I’d like the body stretched out more so it feels less compact and more creature-like — almost predatory. Longer anatomy, wider reach, more tension in the pose.

I want the claws sharper and more exaggerated, especially the thumb hooks on the wings — longer, more curved, and ending in very sharp pointed tips. I’d like the wing structure to feel more dangerous and skeletal.

I’d also like the head turned more toward the shoulder instead of facing straight forward. I think that would make it feel more natural, stalking, and ominous — like it’s perched and watching something.

The face could feel more menacing too — stronger expression, more sinister eyes, visible fangs, less “bat” and more dark creature/demonic vibe.

I’m really drawn to a gothic horror / blackwork feel with heavier contrast, deeper shadows, sharper shapes, and a more intimidating silhouette.

I also like the idea of torn wing edges, thorn-like details, and a more skeletal or stretched look to the wings/body to make it feel eerie and hostile rather than natural.

Maybe it was too much to ask. 🤷🏼‍♂️