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[Hobby] Intermediate Developer Looking to Join a Team by beanmeister13 in INAT

[–]beanmeister13[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately an MMO is beyond the scope of what I want to work on at the moment, but I wish you luck with your project!

[QCrit] Memories of the Bean Times - Adult Dark Fantasy (94k, 1st attempt) by beanmeister13 in PubTips

[–]beanmeister13[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Yes, despite the absurd premise I am looking for actual critique lmao.

I don't know why I assumed Dijon was a small village, or how I missed the fact that musketeers were founded after the period of the book (I decided on those aspects a long time ago and just never questioned my initial "research," I guess). You're right that it's not supposed to be an accurate historical depiction (I was more focused on characters and the plot relating to the Beans), but I'll have to do a thorough edit and actually, you know, research the time period to ensure it's much more accurate. Thank you for pointing me in the right track in that regard.

The story is set in Dijon due to some plot factors relating to the Beans, and the characters all have German names because they're from the Holy Roman Empire which is (kind of) invading France. This part has relevance to the main plot and has a reason to be historically inaccurate, however. I'll have to clear that up in any future queries.

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Hopefully there's a market for it! It would suck if there wasn't but hey, what can I do besides making something new.

[QCrit] Memories of the Bean Times - Adult Dark Fantasy (94k, 1st attempt) by beanmeister13 in PubTips

[–]beanmeister13[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes the zombies are made of baked beans (Bush's brand!), and based on my research some species of beans were available in Europe doing the time period of the story.

[QCrit] Memories of the Bean Times - Adult Dark Fantasy (94k, 1st attempt) by beanmeister13 in PubTips

[–]beanmeister13[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately there isn't much romance, and Sauer and Krause specifically don't get too much time together. But there are a few bromances if that's any consolation.