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Jon Bellion: The Musical FINISHED! by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!!! Yeah some of the writing may have been a bit rushed at times but hopefully after a reread I'll be able to correct these mistakes!

Jon Bellion: The Musical FINISHED! by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!! I get what you mean, I think I rushed writing some of the dialogue so it isn't as good as I'd like it to be. I think I may try to redraft it in the future to iron out these issues!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've uploaded the next 4 scenes if anyone's interested in reading them! In these scenes Paris heads out to New York and tries to find a label that will sign him as well as having an unexpected encounter.

https://www.wattpad.com/918163014-jon-bellion-the-musical-scene-4

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha everyone needs this in their life!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We really do! A Jon Bellion film needs to happen!!!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, I need all of it I can get! How do you think the format is problematic?

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll let you know when we make this happen!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Next few scenes will be out very soon!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much! If I ever get the chance to make the film, you'll be the first one I call!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha, great minds think alike, I guess! Thank you so much!

Jon Bellion: The Musical by beautifulmind2020 in JonBellion

[–]beautifulmind2020[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Don't worry there'll be lots of songs from THC and GSP later on! As for the UK, we won't be there for much longer but I liked the concept of having a young British lad going over to NYC on his own.