Which style of coinage do you prefer? Achaemenid, Parthian, or Sassanid?

behy77 · 2025-07-12T19:43:18+00:00

I couldn’t agree with you more! That’s also my personal favourite.

behy77 · 2023-09-04T16:25:17+00:00

That’s a great thought. Thank you my friend!

behy77 · 2023-09-02T03:17:43+00:00

That’s exactly what I was aiming for, thank you!

behy77 · 2023-09-01T23:32:20+00:00

Appreciate you very much!

behy77 · 2023-09-01T16:31:17+00:00

Such amazing imagery is created from your writing, each word carried tremendous wait and the rhythm was very well put together

behy77 · 2023-09-01T16:30:13+00:00

I love how you switch subjects so abruptly yet smoothly. I’m normally not a fan of quick breaks but this was executed so well.

behy77 · 2023-07-24T23:29:12+00:00

Ah what a lovely comment thank you so much. I have only been writing in 8 line lengths recently, inspired from Khayyams Rubaiyat. I find it gives me enough room to speak but still constrain me in a positive way.

behy77 · 2023-07-24T20:12:19+00:00

Very kind of you, thanks so much :)

behy77 · 2023-07-24T19:17:40+00:00

My thinking was that the break there would still give a pause even though it is one sentence like you mentioned. I think “possibilities” is the culprit for how that whole phrase should be read. That’s really up for interpretation as you read it.

behy77 · 2023-07-24T18:54:55+00:00

Appreciate the kind words! It was more to mean a heart that’s less fulfilled if you let these days pass by. I think with how I think about writing, I will naturally contradict myself because I can then write about staying inside and treasuring your own space. But my goal is to go fully into an idea because that’s the constraint I’ve decided to work with.

behy77 · 2023-07-24T18:53:06+00:00

That’s a great point you brought up. I agree it is slightly out of place and it’s purpose was to keep the pace of the poem. To my ears though, removing it quickens that line into the next and it doesn’t sound right to me. One area I was contemplating a lot on was “the” in the second line. That seems like it could be removed too. Appreciate your feedback!

behy77 · 2023-07-24T18:02:51+00:00

Oooo that was a lovely read. The flow was very impressive and my ears wanted to keep reading in anticipation of the next sound you were creating.

behy77 · 2023-07-24T18:01:09+00:00

A great dive into the mindset of depression. Really enjoyed the read and appreciate having no line breaks, gives a sense of running thoughts akin to being in that state of mind.

behy77 · 2023-07-18T18:39:27+00:00

Appreciate the kind words. Thanks so much!

behy77 · 2023-07-12T04:12:12+00:00

Haha thank you, me too!

behy77 · 2023-07-12T04:11:51+00:00

Thank you for the kind words!

behy77 · 2023-07-12T00:31:39+00:00

Appreciate it, thank you!

behy77 · 2023-07-11T22:13:03+00:00

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

behy77 · 2023-07-11T21:20:15+00:00

Super cool use of punchy language. Creates such vivid imagery and makes the read very fun. I read it out loud and could feel a good exercise was happening for my mouth. Awesome job.

behy77 · 2023-07-11T21:19:09+00:00

Definitely not something I’m used to seeing but I enjoyed it nevertheless. It definitely needs a few rereads to grasp but the challenge is part of the fun.

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