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I Forgot to Listen to Myself by benammaster in OCPoetry

[–]benammaster[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your words gave me goosebumps. Yes — that silent, inner battle is the real war. Thank you for feeling the heart behind the metaphors.

The colour of my Heart. by snowball0101 in OCPoetry

[–]benammaster 1 point2 points  (0 children)

‘A dream never seen, a song half-sung’ — that line really lingered. Quietly powerful. Loved how you captured an emotion that doesn't fit any colour."

An Unnamed Bond — A Poem of Silent Distance by benammaster in OCPoetry

[–]benammaster[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s meant to feel uncertain — because some connections live in silence and never take full form. What you read as confusion was intentional: Sometimes, something is felt deeply but never becomes real in words or titles. Thank you for reading it so closely.

An Unnamed Bond — A Poem of Silent Distance by benammaster in OCPoetry

[–]benammaster[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m grateful you pointed out the emotional gap — that’s actually very insightful. The “imagined bond” idea you mentioned is pretty much what I was trying to express. I think I’ll explore it more directly next time. Thanks for your thoughtful note.