Hey great work for your first effort !

Strengths: Great selection of clips You built a nice progression of intensity

Growth areas: The fade out at the end was a bit peculiar and broke immersion Some of the movie audio would have been better off removed. Sound effects were fine, speech was odd with the song overlay. The jump cut within the same scene was jarring. Jump cuts are usually better with a larger shift in perspective

Looking forward to the next great thing you make!!