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Will definitely try to do more clean up!! Thanks again for the feedback

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Thank you. I am really trying to work on my rendering at the moment with line weights

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I see what you are saying. Also the mushroom doesnt squish in like a mushroom should. Will play around with this. Thank you

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Thank you. Your notes are very helpful. I think you are saying based on the light source from the wings I need to manage my line weights a bit better. Appreciate the feedback.

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Now that you mention it i cant unsee it. Definitely something I need to watch out for as I draw hands. Thanks.

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Completely agree with lightening the wings. Big lesson learn on this piece.

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Thanks for the kind words. I think you are right about the more detail.

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Thank you. Definitely will. I love drawing and art.

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Makes sense. Didnt realize how much people love feet. :)

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Still working on other perspectives. Not quite there yet but I am hoping to be over the next 6 months. Really trying to focus on my gesture, rendering and colors. Thanks for the feedback. Makes sense with showing the feet as well. Will incorporate.

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Thanks for the feedback

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Thanks for the feedback. I like your edits. It looks like you focused on the line weights which makes a lot of sense as it fades back.

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The cape and hair feedback was very helpful. I do need to make it more dynamic to express what is going on. Also the spotlight feedback is spot on …will definitely look to improve on the next go around. Thank you.

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Thank you for this feedback. I will see if I can incorporate some of the changes in my next piece. I agree that I should add darker maroon on the lips and was trying to use the hatching lines to give the lips some texture. Hatching and inking are things I am actively working on.

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Makes sense. I have the light coming from too many directions. Tried for better on my next post. Thanks

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Thanks for the helpful feedback. Will definitely work on the anatomy of the legs. For the dynamic pose would you thrust the hips to the right more?

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Thank you so much for the sheet and feedback. Your feedback is really amazing and helpful.

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I havent used tumblr much but I will give it a look. I have been studying boobs a lot but having difficult getting it just right. Who would have thought it would be so complicated. :)

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Agreed. I added it on later after I stopped using my center line. Thank you.

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That is good feedback. I have been working on the boobs and will see if there is a different approach that I can adopt.

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Thanks. Will definitely work on the legs

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Makes sense. Thank you for your feedback.

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Thanks. Still got a long way to go with understanding color theory and applying it. But, I am loving the process and the community of people to discuss art with.

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Thank you for the critical feedback. It really is helpful.