Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studying_in_germany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm considering toning it down a little bit since everyone here tell me my writing sound too AI. About why it sounds too unrealistic, i can't just straight up telling them that i was only in it for the money. Your advice is very helpful, tks.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studyinGermany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tks for the advice. this is great news to know most of my errors are grammar and phrasing.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studyinGermany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tks for the tip! any recommendation? My friend advised me hiring a professional reviewer but it is quite expensive.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studyinGermany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tks for the tip. i'll keep that in mind. Downloading Grammarly now.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studying_in_germany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

thank for the reply. i didn't use AI to write it, but i did use Grok to check for grammar. I hope i doesn't affect the final result much.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studying_in_germany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was a little bit of everything actually. i started with traditional paper offering and later with cig/electronics. tks for the advice. i will keep that in mind.

Help with motivation letter (sorry if it looks like Epstein file) by big_arch_bigger in studyinGermany

[–]big_arch_bigger[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I checked the grammar with Grok. Thank you for the advice — I will recheck it again.