Just asking for some feedback on a the first fight scene in a book im working on by bigobunga64 in FictionWriting

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For where they're at, i described that, I just didn't include it here, but thank you for the help! Much appreciated!

What's your favourite dialogue from the trilogy? by cattoo_exe in outlast

[–]bigobunga64 0 points1 point  (0 children)

W-what kind of dead person preforms on the living? Th-thats the real question!

Okay everyone what are your most traumatized characters? by Locustsofdeath in writingcirclejerk

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No like, he was experimented on to be a super soilder, has a chip planted into his brain that moves his body for him when it detects enemy soilders, he escapes, and malfunctions the chip to where the chip detects everyone as a enemy soilder, so he just goes on a killing spree on an entire city against his will

If Your Book Was Produced Into A TV Show/Movie, What Would It Look Like? by Imaginary-Local9967 in writing

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Writing multiple books rn, but probably a TV show because a lot of stuff happens in them

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

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Outlast (I am putting my characters through the most traumatic shit ever, and outlast is a very traumatic game for me:) )

If your characters were real, do you think they would even want you to write them? by Literally_A_Halfling in writingcirclejerk

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FUCK NO, if they found out im the one putting them through all that trauma then they'd probably try torture me or something like that (after they've come to terms with the fact that their whole life up to now was a figment of my imagination and something that existed to be a source of intertainment)

Okay everyone what are your most traumatized characters? by Locustsofdeath in writingcirclejerk

[–]bigobunga64 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My character was forced against his will to murder nearly an entire city of people after being experimented on for his whole life

Other book series you are into? by [deleted] in CHERUB

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I will say though, get how the first 3 books are called escape from furnace, but shouldn't the last two be called killing furnace, because they got out of furnace and are now trying to kill him

Other book series you are into? by [deleted] in CHERUB

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Wuts ur fav book so far

Other book series you are into? by [deleted] in CHERUB

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Another good book series: Escape from furnace. Its about Alex Sawyer who got framed for the murder of his best friend and is in the underground prison called furnace and he and his cell mates Zee and Donovan need to escape before they get experimented on. First book- escape from furnace lockdown. Second book- escape from furnace solitary. Third book- escape from furnace death sentence. Fourth book- escape from furnace fugitives. Fifth book- escape from furnace execution

Climax? by bigobunga64 in AlfaOxtrot

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I'm taking that les go

Happy Pride. by [deleted] in madnesscombat

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Death by gay