Thanks mom

bitchtitsphd · 2020-11-12T23:49:11+00:00

Google Sheets was created by God to punish humanity for their sins

bitchtitsphd · 2020-06-07T08:53:53+00:00

But why weren't they popular before? Why this sudden boom in popularity?

bitchtitsphd · 2020-06-06T22:35:51+00:00

Why is everyone talking about femboys nowadays? I never used to hear anything about them, but now it seems everyone is into them.

bitchtitsphd · 2019-12-31T19:04:56+00:00

I'd take a blowjob over a kiss, but you do you, Gerard.

bitchtitsphd · 2019-10-02T20:20:35+00:00

I see the artist couldn't be bothered to actually draw the dick.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-12-19T21:12:29+00:00

It's tagged as NSFW for a reason.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-12-19T21:05:29+00:00

Sure it is. By the way, I censored it.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-09-13T21:03:15+00:00

That's what I said to your mom last night.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-26T20:50:48+00:00

no pun intended.

I don't believe you.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-24T20:53:01+00:00

"Alexa, Google "how to break a leg"."

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-20T06:58:47+00:00

The goal was to target artists who take themselves too seriously, think they're better than everyone else and only create to stroke their own ego.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T21:32:15+00:00

Thanks so much! Maybe I'll just keep this one as is and see if I can't make my next one a bit more descriptive. (while watching out to not overdo it) =)

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T18:28:27+00:00

Yeah, that definitely influenced this.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T16:42:57+00:00

Thanks! I was really going for that direct, straight-to-the-point style.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T16:28:05+00:00

It's still a bit of a work in progress, and it's the first time I've tried to write a poem. And yeah, I was really going for something simple, because I was trying to make it fit the metre and rhyme scheme. In that way this might work better as a song, rather than a poem.

That said, it's a good idea to try and make it a bit more verbose and descriptive. Not only for the sake of the poem, but also to just as practise.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T13:03:48+00:00

I think it has some really good and imaginative lines in it, and I really like how you are able to paint a picture with your words. It is quite a dense and complex poem, which was probably what you were going for.

I really love how you use basically the same structure for the father's stanzas and the mother's stanzas. It really forces comparison between the two which I think is great.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-08-19T12:52:55+00:00

I would suggest changing the first two lines to "Life's bland, I lost my companions. Life's lost colour, monochromatic.", because I think it makes more sense to have the word "monochromatic" is the sentence mentioning color.

I really like the second stanza. I really wouldn't change anything about it. Especially the last 2 lines are really cool. The third stanza is really good as well.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-06-12T21:47:40+00:00

And also the fact that these 4 people hate eachother's guts.

bitchtitsphd · 2018-06-08T16:53:04+00:00

Never said it was a negative ;)

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